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Resent-From: Nicolas Goaziou Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Tue, 21 Mar 2023 17:21:01 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 62348 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch To: Bruno Victal Cc: 62348@debbugs.gnu.org, ludo@gnu.org, mikadoZero Received: via spool by 62348-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B62348.16794192601680 (code B ref 62348); Tue, 21 Mar 2023 17:21:01 +0000 Received: (at 62348) by debbugs.gnu.org; 21 Mar 2023 17:21:00 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:60441 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1peffP-0000R1-Tv for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 21 Mar 2023 13:21:00 -0400 Received: from relay2-d.mail.gandi.net ([217.70.183.194]:53491) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1peffO-0000Qp-69 for 62348@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 21 Mar 2023 13:20:58 -0400 Received: (Authenticated sender: admin@nicolasgoaziou.fr) by mail.gandi.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id C613040009; Tue, 21 Mar 2023 17:20:49 +0000 (UTC) From: Nicolas Goaziou References: <40a8417b0c696509da522c9b5c072f004c0615f0.1679418658.git.mirai@makinata.eu> Date: Tue, 21 Mar 2023 18:20:47 +0100 In-Reply-To: <40a8417b0c696509da522c9b5c072f004c0615f0.1679418658.git.mirai@makinata.eu> (Bruno Victal's message of "Tue, 21 Mar 2023 17:11:20 +0000") Message-ID: <87v8iu10nk.fsf@nicolasgoaziou.fr> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/28.2 (gnu/linux) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 71E90178D0 X-Spam-Score: -3.75 X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -3.75 X-Migadu-Scanner: scn0.migadu.com List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-TUID: Qk/feDwxwfjb Hello, Bruno Victal writes: > From: mikadoZero > > The text for the description is taken from the psmisc readme. > > * gnu/packages/linux.scm (psmisc)[description]: Make description more > informative. Thanks. > + "A package of small utilities that use the proc file-system. This should be a complete sentence, e.g., Psmisc is a set of small utilities=E2=80=A6 > +@itemize @bullet > +@item @command{fuser} - Identifies processes using files or sockets > +@item @command{killall} - kills processes by name, e.g. @samp{killall -H= UP @var{name}} > +@item @command{prtstat} - prints statistics of a process > +@item @command{pslog} - prints log path(s) of a process > +@item @command{pstree} - shows the currently running processes as a tree > +@item @command{peekfd} - shows the data travelling over a file descriptor > +@end itemize") I suggest to remove the dashes, and probably add semicolons at the end of all but last item: @item @command{fuser} identifies processes using files or sockets; I suggest to add a comma after "e.g.", so Texinfo cannot consider it to be the end of a sentence: @item @command{killall} kills processes by name, e.g., @samp{killall -HUP= @var{name}}; Actually, I even wonder if providing an example if worth being in a generic description. I probably belongs to a user manual: @item @command{killall} kills processes by name; Regards, --=20 Nicolas Goaziou