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From: "Miguel Ángel Arruga Vivas" <rosen644835@gmail.com>
To: 43934@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#43934] [PATCH 1/2] Fix minor typos
Date: Sun, 11 Oct 2020 21:12:59 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87tuv060g4.fsf@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <87zh4s60l2.fsf@gmail.com>

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From b76d4698982946c2f72084a023513045a8977fde Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 11 Oct 2020 19:46:16 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] doc: Fix minor typos.

* doc/guix.texi (cargo-build-system): Fix install phase description.
(julia-build-system): Fix typo and add information from check.
(pulseaudio-configuration): Remove duplicated words.
(knot-acl-configuration)[id]: Fix typo.
(mpd-output)[extra-options]: Likewise.
(libvirt-configuration) [listen-tls?]: Add missing subject.
[listen-tcp?]: Add missing subject and period.
[tls-port, tcp-port, log-filters]: Add missing period.
(hurd-vm-configuration)[netoptions]: Fix typo in example.
(ganeti-watcher-service-type): Fix typo.
(grub-theme)[gfxmode]: Remove see before @pxref.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 36 ++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 8514dfe86f..c3d9683e25 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -6911,8 +6911,8 @@ In its @code{configure} phase, this build system will make any source inputs
 specified in the @code{#:cargo-inputs} and @code{#:cargo-development-inputs}
 parameters available to cargo.  It will also remove an included
 @code{Cargo.lock} file to be recreated by @code{cargo} during the
-@code{build} phase.  The @code{install} phase installs any crate the binaries
-if they are defined by the crate.
+@code{build} phase.  The @code{install} phase installs the binaries
+defined by the crate.
 @end defvr
 
 
@@ -7158,7 +7158,7 @@ implements the build procedure used by @uref{https://julialang.org/,
 julia} packages, which essentially is similar to running @samp{julia -e
 'using Pkg; Pkg.add(package)'} in an environment where
 @env{JULIA_LOAD_PATH} contains the paths to all Julia package inputs.
-Tests are run not run.
+Tests are run with @code{Pkg.test}.
 
 Julia packages require the source @code{file-name} to be the real name of the
 package, correctly capitalized.
@@ -17771,10 +17771,10 @@ List of settings to set in @file{daemon.conf}, formatted just like
 @var{client-conf}.
 
 @item @var{script-file} (default: @code{(file-append pulseaudio "/etc/pulse/default.pa")})
-Script file to use as as @file{default.pa}.
+Script file to use as @file{default.pa}.
 
 @item @var{system-script-file} (default: @code{(file-append pulseaudio "/etc/pulse/system.pa")})
-Script file to use as as @file{system.pa}.
+Script file to use as @file{system.pa}.
 @end table
 @end deftp
 
@@ -22906,7 +22906,7 @@ This type has the following parameters:
 
 @table @asis
 @item @code{id} (default: @code{""})
-An identifier for ether configuration fields to refer to this key. IDs must be
+An identifier for other configuration fields to refer to this key. IDs must be
 unique and must not be empty.
 
 @item @code{address} (default: @code{'()})
@@ -24897,7 +24897,7 @@ mixer, the @code{null} mixer (allows setting the volume, but with no
 effect; this can be used as a trick to implement an external mixer
 External Mixer) or no mixer (@code{none}).
 
-@item @code{extra-options} (default: @code{'()"})
+@item @code{extra-options} (default: @code{'()})
 An association list of option symbols to string values to be appended to
 the audio output configuration.
 
@@ -24955,7 +24955,7 @@ Libvirt package.
 
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} boolean listen-tls?
 Flag listening for secure TLS connections on the public TCP/IP port.
-must set @code{listen} for this to have any effect.
+You must set @code{listen} for this to have any effect.
 
 It is necessary to setup a CA and issue server certificates before using
 this capability.
@@ -24965,28 +24965,28 @@ Defaults to @samp{#t}.
 @end deftypevr
 
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} boolean listen-tcp?
-Listen for unencrypted TCP connections on the public TCP/IP port.  must
+Listen for unencrypted TCP connections on the public TCP/IP port.  You must
 set @code{listen} for this to have any effect.
 
 Using the TCP socket requires SASL authentication by default.  Only SASL
 mechanisms which support data encryption are allowed.  This is
-DIGEST_MD5 and GSSAPI (Kerberos5)
+DIGEST_MD5 and GSSAPI (Kerberos5).
 
 Defaults to @samp{#f}.
 
 @end deftypevr
 
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} string tls-port
-Port for accepting secure TLS connections This can be a port number, or
-service name
+Port for accepting secure TLS connections.   This can be a port number,
+or service name.
 
 Defaults to @samp{"16514"}.
 
 @end deftypevr
 
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} string tcp-port
-Port for accepting insecure TCP connections This can be a port number,
-or service name
+Port for accepting insecure TCP connections.  This can be a port number,
+or service name.
 
 Defaults to @samp{"16509"}.
 
@@ -25298,7 +25298,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{3}.
 Logging filters.
 
 A filter allows to select a different logging level for a given category
-of logs The format for a filter is one of:
+of logs.  The format for a filter is one of:
 
 @itemize @bullet
 @item
@@ -25828,7 +25828,7 @@ By default, it produces
 with forwarded ports:
 
 @example
-@var{ssh-port}: @code{(+ 11004 (* 1000 @var{ID}))}
+@var{secrets-port}: @code{(+ 11004 (* 1000 @var{ID}))}
 @var{ssh-port}: @code{(+ 10022 (* 1000 @var{ID}))}
 @var{vnc-port}: @code{(+ 15900 (* 1000 @var{ID}))}
 @end example
@@ -26473,7 +26473,7 @@ When true, the daemon performs additional logging for debugging purposes.
 @defvr {Scheme Variable} ganeti-watcher-service-type
 @command{ganeti-watcher} is a script designed to run periodically and ensure
 the health of a cluster.  It will automatically restart instances that have
-stopped without Ganetis consent, and repairs DRBD links in case a node has
+stopped without Ganeti's consent, and repairs DRBD links in case a node has
 rebooted.  It also archives old cluster jobs and restarts Ganeti daemons
 that are not running.  If the cluster parameter @code{ensure_node_health}
 is set, the watcher will also shutdown instances and DRBD devices if the
@@ -29410,7 +29410,7 @@ Data type representing the configuration of the GRUB theme.
 
 @table @asis
 @item @code{gfxmode} (default: @code{'("auto")})
-The GRUB @code{gfxmode} to set (a list of screen resolution strings, see
+The GRUB @code{gfxmode} to set (a list of screen resolution strings,
 @pxref{gfxmode,,, grub, GNU GRUB manual}).
 @end table
 @end deftp
-- 
2.28.0





  reply	other threads:[~2020-10-11 19:14 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-10-11 19:10 [bug#43934] [PATCH 0/2] Fixes for the manual Miguel Ángel Arruga Vivas
2020-10-11 19:12 ` Miguel Ángel Arruga Vivas [this message]
2020-10-11 19:14   ` [bug#43934] [PATCH 2/2] Fixes for Texinfo metainfo Miguel Ángel Arruga Vivas
2020-10-17 12:38 ` [bug#43934] [PATCH 0/2] Fixes for the manual Ludovic Courtès
2020-10-17 14:24   ` bug#43934: " Miguel Ángel Arruga Vivas
2020-10-19  8:28     ` [bug#43934] " Ludovic Courtès

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