[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
 etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..2f41669406 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+        (title
+         (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+         (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configuration de matériel"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+         (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
  (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
         (title
           (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
 etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..ae103d6988 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+        (title
+         (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+         (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+         (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
  (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
         (title
           (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[Vivien Kraus]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
 etc/news.scm | 15 +++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..6dec7a08b7 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,21 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+        (title
+         (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+         (de "Udev verwaltet nun auch Hardwarekonfigurationen")
+         (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+         (de "Der Udev-Dienst kann nun mit Hardwaredatenbanken (auch als
+@dfn{hwdb} bekannt) konfiguriert und erweitert werden.")
+         (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
  (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
         (title
           (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[Vivien Kraus]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
Signed-off-by: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
---
 etc/news.scm | 18 ++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..18586768c0 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,24 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+        (title
+         (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+         (de "Udev verwaltet nun auch Hardwarekonfigurationen")
+         (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel")
+         (zh "udev 服務現可管理硬件配置文件"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+         (de "Der Udev-Dienst kann nun mit Hardwaredatenbanken (auch als
+@dfn{hwdb} bekannt) konfiguriert und erweitert werden.")
+         (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")
+         (zh "現可使用 eudev 的硬件配置文件（@dfn{hwdb}）設置及拓展
+@code{udev-service-type}。")))
+
  (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
         (title
           (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
 etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 2f41669406..74af1a7eca 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+        (title
+         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+         (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use wayland instead
+of xorg by default.")
+         (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser wayland au lieu de xorg.")))
+
  (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
         (title
          (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
 etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index ae103d6988..836ebb2127 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+        (title
+         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+         (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+         (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")))
+
  (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
         (title
          (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Vivien Kraus]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
 etc/news.scm | 13 +++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 6dec7a08b7..d208988297 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,19 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+        (title
+         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+         (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun standardgemäß Wayland")
+         (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+         (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun standardgemäß
+Wayland anstelle von Xorg.")
+         (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")))
+
  (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
         (title
          (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Vivien Kraus]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
Signed-off-by: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
---
 etc/news.scm | 15 +++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 18586768c0..5c4df0b912 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,21 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+        (title
+         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+         (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun Wayland als Vorgabe")
+         (fr "GDM utilise Wayland par défaut")
+         (zh "GNOME 顯示管理器（GDM）服務默認啓用 Wayland 支持"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+         (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun Wayland
+als Vorgabe anstelle von Xorg.")
+         (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")
+         (zh "@code{gdm-service-type} 預設已由 Xorg 改爲 Wayland。")))
+
  (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
         (title
          (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 0/2] Add entries for important gnome-team changes

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

Dear guix,

I see two important news entries that users should maybe be aware of.  What do
you think of my wording?  Do you see something else that should get its own
entry?  For instance, now dbus writes its system socket in /run/dbus instead
of /var/run/dbus (the latter being a symlink for compatibility), do you think
users should be aware of that?

Best regards,

Vivien

Vivien Kraus (2):
  news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
  news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

 etc/news.scm | 22 ++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+)


base-commit: 06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.

[Maxim Cournoyer]

Hi,

Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu> writes:

> * etc/news.scm: Add entry.
>
> Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
> ---
>  etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
> index 3e8c88499f..2f41669406 100644
> --- a/etc/news.scm
> +++ b/etc/news.scm
> @@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
>  (channel-news
>   (version 0)
>  
> + (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
> +        (title
> +         (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
> +         (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configuration de
> matériel"))

configurationS

> +        (body
> +         (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
> +with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
> +project).")
> +         (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
> +configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
> +@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
> +
>   (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
>          (title
>            (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")

Otherwise LGTM.

-- 
Thanks,
Maxim

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Maxim Cournoyer]

Hello,

Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu> writes:

> * etc/news.scm: Add entry.
>
> Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
> ---
>  etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
> index 2f41669406..74af1a7eca 100644
> --- a/etc/news.scm
> +++ b/etc/news.scm
> @@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
>  (channel-news
>   (version 0)
>  
> + (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
> +        (title
> +         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
> +         (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
> +        (body
> +         (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use wayland instead
> +of xorg by default.")
> +         (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
> +utiliser wayland au lieu de xorg.")))
> +

Nitpick, but I'd capitalize the Wayland and Xorg proper nouns.

Otherwise LGTM.

-- 
Thanks,
Maxim

[bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 0/2] Slightly better news for GNOME

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

Oops!

Here is a V2.  It is not exhaustive.

Best regards,

Vivien

Vivien Kraus (2):
  news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
  news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

 etc/news.scm | 22 ++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

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* etc/teams.scm: Add entry.
---
 etc/news.scm | 21 +++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index d208988297..be1514692b 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,27 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
+        (title
+         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular desktop service")
+         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem Dienst"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now differentiates between
+shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring more structure
+in its configuration.
+
+With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated and others
+removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes an error while
+running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your profile.")
+         (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} unterscheidet nun
+unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-packages und
+bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
+
+Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
+und andere entfernt.  Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
+Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))
+
  (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
         (title
          (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

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* etc/news.scm: Add entry.
---
 etc/news.scm | 39 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 39 insertions(+)

diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 5c4df0b912..efc2ce7ad6 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,45 @@
 (channel-news
  (version 0)
 
+ (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
+        (title
+         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular desktop service")
+         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem Dienst")
+         (fr "Mise à jour de GNOME en version 44 avec un service plus modulaire")
+         (zh "GNOME 44 更新，帶來更加模塊化的桌面服務"))
+        (body
+         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now differentiates between
+shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring more structure
+in its configuration.
+
+With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated and others
+removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} package causes an error
+while running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your
+profile.")
+         (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} unterscheidet nun
+unter anderem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities und extra-packages, und
+bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
+
+Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
+und andere entfernt.  Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt, zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
+Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von Ihrem Profil.")
+         (fr "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
+maintenant les champs @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
+packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
+configuration.
+
+Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell ont
+été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
+effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil.")
+         (zh "@code{gnome-desktop-service-type} 設置新增 @code{shell}、
+@code{utilities}、@code{extra-packages} 等字段，使得 GNOME 桌面配置更加模塊化。
+
+隨着 GNOME 44 更新，一些 GNOME Shell 拓展已被棄用或刪除。更新中若有關於
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} 軟件包的錯誤，請將對應軟件包從 profile 中
+刪除。")))
+
  (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
         (title
          (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 0/3] *** SUBJECT HERE ***

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

*** BLURB HERE ***

Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
  news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

Vivien Kraus (2):
  news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
  news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

 etc/news.scm | 49 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 49 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a écrit :
> + (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
> +        (title
> +         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular
> desktop service")
Wouldn’t it be more precise to say “system service” instead of “desktop
service”?

> +         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem
> Dienst"))

Suggested fr translation with “system service”: "Mise à jour de GNOME
en version 44 avec un service système plus modulaire"
(remove “système” if “system service” is not relevant)

> +        (body
> +         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now
> differentiates between
> +shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring
> more structure
> +in its configuration.
> +
> +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> and others
> +removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes an
> error while
> +running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your
> profile.")
(Ah yes, this is very important.)

Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”. I
would also write: “some shell extensions have been deprecated…” instead
of “some extensions have been deprecated…”, so the error message will
look more familiar. Since the fields are actual record fields, maybe
they can be marked up with @code{}?

Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
configuration.

Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell ont
été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."

> +         (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type}
> unterscheidet nun
> +unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-
> packages und
> +bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
> +
> +Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet
> deklariert
> +und andere entfernt.  Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
> +@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
> +Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))
> +

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 0/3] gnome-team news entries.

[Hilton Chain via Guix-patches via]

Hi,

On Tue, 27 Feb 2024 03:48:31 +0800,
Liliana Marie Prikler wrote:
>
> *** BLURB HERE ***
>
> Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
>   news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
>
> Vivien Kraus (2):
>   news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
>   news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
>
>  etc/news.scm | 49 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 49 insertions(+)
>
>
> base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
> --
> 2.41.0

Take my translation. :)

For 498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179, "The udev service also manages
hardware configuration files":
--8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
(zh "udev 服務現可管理硬件配置文件")
(zh "現可使用 eudev 的硬件配置文件（@dfn{hwdb}）設置及拓展
@code{udev-service-type}。")
--8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---



06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae, "The GNOME Display Manager uses
wayland by default":
--8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
(zh "GNOME 顯示管理器（GDM）服務默認啓用 Wayland 支持")
(zh "@code{gdm-service-type} 預設已由 Xorg 改爲 Wayland。")
--8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---



523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5, "GNOME updated to version 44 with a
more modular desktop service":
--8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
(zh "GNOME 44 更新，帶來更加模塊化的桌面服務")
(zh "@code{gnome-desktop-service-type} 設置新增 @code{shell}、
@code{utilities}、@code{extra-packages} 等字段，使得 GNOME 桌面配置更加模塊化。

隨着 GNOME 44 更新，一些 GNOME Shell 拓展已被棄用或刪除。更新中若有關於
@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} 軟件包的錯誤，請將對應軟件包從 profile 中
刪除。")
--8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

Am Montag, dem 26.02.2024 um 21:28 +0100 schrieb Vivien Kraus:
> Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a
> écrit :
> > + (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
> > +        (title
> > +         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular
> > desktop service")
> Wouldn’t it be more precise to say “system service” instead of
> “desktop service”?
> 
> > +         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem
> > Dienst"))
> 
> Suggested fr translation with “system service”: "Mise à jour de GNOME
> en version 44 avec un service système plus modulaire"
> (remove “système” if “system service” is not relevant)
system-service is indeed not relevant, because I was hinting at the
"desktop" in gnome-desktop-service-type.

> > +        (body
> > +         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now
> > differentiates between
> > +shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring
> > more structure
> > +in its configuration.
> > +
> > +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> > and others
> > +removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes
> > an
> > error while
> > +running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from
> > your
> > profile.")
> (Ah yes, this is very important.)
> 
> Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”.
Not sure if that works recursively.

> I would also write: “some shell extensions have been deprecated…”
> instead of “some extensions have been deprecated…”, so the error
> message will look more familiar. 
Sure.

> Since the fields are actual record fields, maybe they can be marked
> up with @code{}?
Good hint.

> Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
> maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
> packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
> configuration.
> 
> Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell
> ont
> été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
> @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
> effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."
Have you checked how that renders?

> 
Cheers

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)]

Hi all.  Good to see so many translations, and so much development for
Guix!

@Vivien:
> Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
> maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-

Perhaps “les champs” as in English, instead of “les paquets”.

@Liliana:
Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
> * etc/teams.scm: Add entry.

teams?

> +unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-packages und
> +bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.

In German, there shouldn’t be an Oxford comma, instead: utilities und
extra-packages (without comma).

Other than that, even though I would have written “unter anderem”, I do
approve of the “unter andrem”.  Wiktionary says it’s OK. :)

> +Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
> +und andere entfernt.  Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
> +@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer

Paariges Komma fehlt: “beginnt, zu einem Fehler”

> +Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))

von Ihrem Profil

Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
>> Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”.
> Not sure if that works recursively.
>> été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
>> @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
>> effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."
> Have you checked how that renders?

There is precedent in another news entry on Childhurds:

When you do this, @command{guix system} generates
a @file{/etc/guix/machines.scm} file by concatenating the @code{(build-machine
@dots{})} expressions you specified.

Regards,
Florian

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)]

Hi Vivien.  Following up on Maxim Cournoyer’s suggestion, better
capitalize Wayland and Xorg in the titles as well.

Regards,
Florian

[bug#69392] [PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)]

P.S.

Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
> +        (title
> +         (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun standardgemäß Wayland")[…])
> +        (body
> +         (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun standardgemäß
> +Wayland anstelle von Xorg.")

Please write “als Vorgabe” instead of “standardgemäß” in both German
title and body, because it is the translation of “by default” that is
used everywhere in the German manual.

Regards,
Florian

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 0/3] Updated news with your suggestions

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

Hi Guix,

this series should take in all the change requests that were mentioned
for v3.  If any of them are not in there, that is an oversight of mine;
please point them out.

Cheers

Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
  news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

Vivien Kraus (2):
  news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
  news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

 etc/news.scm | 72 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
-- 
2.41.0

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

[Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via]

Thank you for the hard work of piecing together the hints and
suggestions in different languages!

Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a écrit :
> +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> and others
> +removed. 
The only thing missing here from the discussion is “some shell
extensions” instead of “some extensions”, otherwise I’m OK with all
news items.

Vivien

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)]

Some more final comments.

First, is it intended that the author is
Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
and not
Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu>
?

Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
> +        (title
> +         (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")

Please capitalize Wayland in the English title.

> +         (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun Wayland

Remove the word “ist”, otherwise there’d be two verbs in this sentence.
I missed this one.

Regards,
Florian

[bug#69392] [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)]

Final addendum, Hilton, Vivien, Liliana should get copyright headers.

Regards,
Florian

bug#69392: [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

[Liliana Marie Prikler]

Am Mittwoch, dem 28.02.2024 um 08:18 +0100 schrieb pelzflorian (Florian
Pelz):
> Final addendum, Hilton, Vivien, Liliana should get copyright headers.
Of course we should.  In fact we did, as it's pushed.

Closing