Hi Nicolas,

Thanks for the review.

Nicolas Goaziou <mail@nicolasgoaziou.fr> writes:

> Could you add a comment explaining why you don't use a tagged commit
> (in this case, there is none)?

Done.

>> +        (revision "1"))
>> +    (package
>> +      (name "emacs-graphql-mode")
>> +      (version commit)
>> +      (source
>> +       (origin
>> +         (method git-fetch)
>> +         (uri (git-reference
>> +               (url "https://github.com/davazp/graphql-mode")
>> +               (commit commit)))
>> +         (file-name (git-file-name name version))
>> +         (sha256
>> +          (base32
>> +           "0x9y7qq6y0zg8ncamzvk68ccmdyzh7xsj0xs0ykyl20d5wdpplj4"))))
>
> Nitpick: please move the string on the same line as `base32'.

Done.

>> +      (build-system emacs-build-system)
>> +      (home-page
>> +       "https://github.com/davazp/graphql-mode")
>
> Nitpick: please move the string on the same line as `home-page'.

Done.

>> +      (synopsis "Emacs mode to edit GraphQL schema and queries")
>> +      (description
>> +       "This package provides an Emacs mode for editing graphql queries and
>> +schemas.")
>
> I suggest to expound the description a bit. For example, using
> commentary section of the library, it could be something along the lines
> of:
>
>     This package implements a major mode to edit GraphQL schemas and
>     query. The basic functionality includes syntax highlight and
>     indentation. Additionally, it is able to send GraphQL queries to an
>     end-point URL.
>
>     Files with the @file{.graphql} and @file{.gql} extensions are
>     automatically opened with this mode.

Done. I missed the description in graphql-mode.el.

Thanks again,

John