Jesse,

Thank you!  I am b1ff and can't figure out how to make emacs quote 
an attachment, so consider +es >s below.
 
Jesse Gibbons 写道：+  %D%/packages/filters.scm			\ 

A new file's overkill.  I created a toys.scm file long ago for 
misfit toys that aren't games.  They could use some company. 
There's also games.scm which already contains talkfilters, 
although they aren't games dammit.

Choose wisely.
 
+(define-module (gnu packages filters) +#:use-module (guix 
build-system gnu) +#:use-module (guix download) +#:use-module 
(guix git-download) +#:use-module ((guix licenses) #:prefix 
license:) +#:use-module (guix packages) +#:use-module (gnu 
packages bison) +#:use-module (gnu packages flex) +#:use-module 
(gnu packages perl))

Not a relevant nitpick anymore, but this would have been indented.
 
+  (let +      ((version "2.55")

More nitpicking: convention is to write the above as one line.
 
+         (uri (git-reference +               (url 
"git://git.joeyh.name/filters")

https:// is preferred over git://, if not for any ‘security’ 
benefit, then for the fact that it's much more 
unfriendly-firewall-friendly.

https://git.joeyh.name/git/filters.git works here.

+             (lambda* (#:key outputs #:allow-other-keys) + 
(let ((out (assoc-ref outputs "out")))

Both lines can be written simply as

  (lambda _

since OUT and hence OUTPUTS are never used in this final version.
 
+                   (("kenny") +                    "")))

This part would have belonged in the phase below, but
 
+           ;; kenny is under nonfree Artistic License (Perl) 1.0. 
+           (add-after 'fix-install-directories 
'remove-nonfree-filter +             (lambda _ + 
(substitute* "Makefile" +                 (("kenny") + 
"")) +               #t)))

I'm afraid this isn't an option when unfree code is involved.  The 
offending files must be removed (and any Makefiles &c. fixed if 
feasible) in a source snippet so ‘guix build --source filters’ 
doesn't return unfree code to unsuspecting users.  Examples of 
snippets abound.
 
+         #:make-flags (list "CC=gcc" (string-append "DESTDIR=" 
%output))

Prefer putting each assignment on its own line for clarity.
 
+         #:tests? #f))

‘; no test suite’?
 
+      (home-page "http://joeyh.name/code/filters/")

Prefer HTTPS here too.
 
+      (synopsis "Various amusing text filters") + 
(description "The filters collection harks back to the late 80's, 
when

‘80s’ (1980s, even, who knows how long Guix will prosper ;-).
 
+various text filters were written to munge written language in 
amusing ways.  +The earliest and best known were legends such as 
the Swiedish Chef filter and

‘Swedish’ (or ‘Sweedish’ as below, although that's not the common 
name).

‘legends’ is a bit too PR-ish for my tastes but I'll leave it up 
to you.
 
+@item b1ff - The B1FF filter

‘A satire of a stereotypical Usenet newbie’. 

+@item censor - CDA-ize text +@item chef - convert English on 
stdin to Mock Sweedish on stdout
+@item cockney - Cockney English

This list is long, and each description is written in a wildly 
different style which annoys me for some reason.  I prefer the 
last one, it's simple and to the point.

I think a list of all filters can be justified here (it helps 
searching for ‘pirate’ :-) but >1 line each is too much.

‘jibberish’ & ‘fanboy’ focus too much the workings of the code; ‘A 
random combination of all other filters’ and ‘Speak like a fanboy 
(supports custom fandoms)’ are sufficient.   +The GNU project 
hosts a similar collection of filters, the GNU talkfilters.  Due 
+to copyright concerns and difficulty in communication between 
maintainers, these +collections have not been merged.")

I think the description is already quite long without this 
factoid.
 
+      (license (list license:gpl2+ ;; most of the filters (see 
debian/copyright) +                     license:gpl2 ;; rasterman, 
ky00te.dir/* nethackify, pirate + 
license:gpl3+ ;; scramble, scottish + 
license:public-domain ;; jethro, kraut, ken, studly + 
license:gpl1+ ;; cockney, jive, nyc only say "gpl" + 
license:expat))))) ;; newspeak. 

Thank you for taking the time to list each filter!  Trailing 
comments like this take only a single ‘;’, no ‘.’, and are 
indented together (either by your editor or by 
etc/indent-code.el).

Something like: 
 
      (license
       (list license:gpl2+    ; most of the filters (see 
       debian/copyright) 
        license:gpl2          ; rasterman, ky00te.dir/* 
        nethackify, pirate license:gpl3+         ; scramble, 
        scottish license:public-domain ; jethro, kraut, ken, 
        studly license:gpl1+         ; cockney, jive, nyc only say 
        "gpl" license:expat)))))    ; newspeak 

Thanks again,

T G-R