From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mp0 ([2001:41d0:2:4a6f::]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits)) by ms11 with LMTPS id YIn6G+k8Vl+7aAAA0tVLHw (envelope-from ) for ; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 14:00:09 +0000 Received: from aspmx1.migadu.com ([2001:41d0:2:4a6f::]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits)) by mp0 with LMTPS id 2KsJGOk8Vl/zSQAA1q6Kng (envelope-from ) for ; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 14:00:09 +0000 Received: from lists.gnu.org (lists.gnu.org [209.51.188.17]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by aspmx1.migadu.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B2C8094066B for ; Mon, 7 Sep 2020 14:00:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost ([::1]:48608 helo=lists1p.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHgl-0001yL-8X for larch@yhetil.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 10:00:07 -0400 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]:41298) by lists.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHgh-0001y1-Ec for guix-patches@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 10:00:03 -0400 Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([209.51.188.43]:38757) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_128_GCM_SHA256:128) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHgh-0003cM-59 for guix-patches@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 10:00:03 -0400 Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHgh-00017e-34 for guix-patches@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 10:00:03 -0400 X-Loop: help-debbugs@gnu.org Subject: [bug#42317] [PATCH] doc: cookbook: Adding a section "Running Guix on a Linode Server Resent-From: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Mon, 07 Sep 2020 14:00:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 42317 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: To: Joshua Branson Cc: 42317@debbugs.gnu.org Received: via spool by 42317-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B42317.15994871684225 (code B ref 42317); Mon, 07 Sep 2020 14:00:02 +0000 Received: (at 42317) by debbugs.gnu.org; 7 Sep 2020 13:59:28 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:50302 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHg8-000164-1J for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 09:59:28 -0400 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([209.51.188.92]:59306) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHg6-00015s-5j for 42317@debbugs.gnu.org; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 09:59:26 -0400 Received: from fencepost.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::e]:42435) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHfz-0003YW-Rc; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 09:59:19 -0400 Received: from [2001:660:6102:320:e120:2c8f:8909:cdfe] (port=44434 helo=ribbon) by fencepost.gnu.org with esmtpsa (TLS1.2:RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.82) (envelope-from ) id 1kFHfx-0003D1-6R; Mon, 07 Sep 2020 09:59:17 -0400 From: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= References: <87v9iukhn1.fsf@dismail.de> <20200901104505.31147-1-jbranso@dismail.de> Date: Mon, 07 Sep 2020 15:59:11 +0200 In-Reply-To: <20200901104505.31147-1-jbranso@dismail.de> (Joshua Branson's message of "Tue, 1 Sep 2020 06:45:04 -0400") Message-ID: <871rjdit74.fsf@gnu.org> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/26.3 (gnu/linux) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Spam-Score: -2.3 (--) X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-Spam-Score: -3.3 (---) X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: "Guix-patches" X-Scanner: scn0 Authentication-Results: aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=none; dmarc=none; spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of guix-patches-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=guix-patches-bounces@gnu.org X-Spam-Score: -1.01 X-TUID: nKwqUkHkVsf3 Hi Joshua, Thanks for following up on this! Minor comments: Joshua Branson skribis: > +@node Running Guix on a Linode Server > +@section Running Guix on a Linode Server > +@cindex linode > + > +Start with a recommended Debian server. We recommend using the default ^ I=E2=80=99d start the sentence with something like =E2=80=9CTo run Guix on = a server hosted by @uref{https://www.linode.com/, Linode}, start with a =E2=80=A6=E2= =80=9D. (That makes it clear what we=E2=80=99re talking about, what Linode is, etc.) > +distro as a way to bootstrap Guix. Create your @code{SSH} keys. [...] > +Be sure to add your @code{SSH key} for easy login to the remote server. [...] > +Power the @code {Linode} down. In the @code{Linode's} I realize I wasn=E2=80=99t clear: @code is for code snippets. When referri= ng to Linode (the service/company) or SSH (the protocol), just write it as is, without @code. You would use @code for a command (like @code{rm -rf /foo}) and @file for a file name (like @file{/dev/sdc}). Text enclosed in @code or @file is rendered with a fixed-width font and possibly a different background color. > +"..." and select "Edit", then on that menu add to /dev/sdc the "Guix" ^ @file here. > +root@@}. (You can find your server ip address in ^ @var{your-server-ip-here} And s/ip/IP/. Let me know if you can take care of those last (I promise!) changes. Thank you! Ludo=E2=80=99.