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Sat, 14 Oct 2023 11:53:11 +0200 (CEST) References: From: pukkamustard Date: Sat, 14 Oct 2023 09:37:56 +0000 In-reply-to: Message-ID: <86bkd17coq.fsf@posteo.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Scanner: mx1.migadu.com X-Migadu-Spam-Score: 3.90 X-Spam-Score: 3.90 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: C53E05E734 X-TUID: CRDS8OVfjUNL Hi, Thanks for the update. I haven't been able to check it thoroughly yet. Unfortunately the synopsis/descriptions still need a bit of polish. For example (non-exhaustive): - ocaml-pp: The synopsis should indicate that it is an OCaml library. For markup (in this case hyerplinks) you must use the Texinfo markup (see https://guix.gnu.org/manual/en/guix.html#Synopses-and-Descriptions). - ocamlformat-rpc-lib: Final sentence is missing a punctuation. - ocaml-ppx-yojson-conv-lib: See ocaml-ppx-fields-conv for an example of a better description/synopsis. - ocaml-dyn: Missing punctiation mark. - ocaml-stdune: Not sure about the description. - ocaml-xdg: Description should be more than just a link. Also maybe we first re-solve #63947 (https://issues.guix.gnu.org/63947; friendly ping to Julien) instead of re-fixining it in this series. Cheers, pukkamustard