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From: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
To: Adam Faiz <adam.faiz@disroot.org>
Cc: 60153@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#60153] [PATCH v2 3/3] gnu: python-pygame: Reword description.
Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2022 21:45:24 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <76223dfff555ef0c545e994eb2eb808423a333d4.camel@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <3e37f988-a3ec-ccce-033e-1807fe7859b9@disroot.org>

* gnu/packages/game-development.scm (python-pygame)[description]: Join
sentences describing functionality.  Capitalize “Python”.
Cut down the marketing talk.
---
 gnu/packages/game-development.scm | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
index 31bc76d4fd..0f96784dd3 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
@@ -1247,8 +1247,8 @@ (define-public python-pygame
     (home-page "https://www.pygame.org")
     (synopsis "SDL wrapper for Python")
     (description "Pygame is a set of Python modules designed for writing games.
-Pygame adds functionality on top of the excellent SDL library. This allows you
-to create fully featured games and multimedia programs in the python language.")
+It adds functionality on top of the SDL library, allowing you to create games
+and multimedia programs in the Python language.")
     (license (list license:bsd-2
                    ;; python numeric license as listed by Debian looks like
                    ;; an Expat-style license with a warranty disclaimer for
-- 
2.38.1





  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-12-23 19:31 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-12-17 10:01 [bug#60153] [PATCH] gnu: python-pygame: Update to 2.1.2 Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
     [not found] ` <93aa8b09-cc29-4030-3c76-458158ea0c0f@disroot.org>
2022-12-17 10:52   ` [bug#60153] Fwd: " Liliana Marie Prikler
2022-12-18 14:15     ` Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-18 15:02       ` Liliana Marie Prikler
2022-12-18 15:51 ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v1 1/3] " Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-18 15:54   ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v1 2/3] gnu: python-pygame: Use gexps and new style inputs Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-18 15:57     ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v1 3/3] gnu: python-pygame: Fix description Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-18 15:51 ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v2 1/3] gnu: python-pygame: Update to 2.1.2 Adam Faiz
2022-12-23 23:20   ` Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-23 23:43     ` Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-23 23:54       ` Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-24  5:51       ` Liliana Marie Prikler
2022-12-24 13:19         ` Adam Faiz via Guix-patches via
2022-12-24  5:39     ` Liliana Marie Prikler
2022-12-18 15:54 ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v2 2/3] gnu: python-pygame: Use G-Expressions and new-style inputs Adam Faiz
2022-12-22 20:45 ` Liliana Marie Prikler [this message]
2022-12-22 21:09 ` [bug#60153] [PATCH v2 0/3] Update python-pygame to 2.1.2 Liliana Marie Prikler
2022-12-31  7:34   ` bug#60153: " Liliana Marie Prikler

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