From: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
To: Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu>, 69392@debbugs.gnu.org
Cc: rg@raghavgururajan.name, maxim.cournoyer@gmail.com
Subject: [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2024 06:19:55 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <3b9d1f0ba2626dc78b3c07ac0eb385146db88464.camel@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <d8304ce857c94cb8b3d729c8b90fd10df00ad1d6.camel@planete-kraus.eu>
Am Montag, dem 26.02.2024 um 21:28 +0100 schrieb Vivien Kraus:
> Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a
> écrit :
> > + (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
> > + (title
> > + (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular
> > desktop service")
> Wouldn’t it be more precise to say “system service” instead of
> “desktop service”?
>
> > + (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem
> > Dienst"))
>
> Suggested fr translation with “system service”: "Mise à jour de GNOME
> en version 44 avec un service système plus modulaire"
> (remove “système” if “system service” is not relevant)
system-service is indeed not relevant, because I was hinting at the
"desktop" in gnome-desktop-service-type.
> > + (body
> > + (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now
> > differentiates between
> > +shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring
> > more structure
> > +in its configuration.
> > +
> > +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> > and others
> > +removed. If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes
> > an
> > error while
> > +running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from
> > your
> > profile.")
> (Ah yes, this is very important.)
>
> Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”.
Not sure if that works recursively.
> I would also write: “some shell extensions have been deprecated…”
> instead of “some extensions have been deprecated…”, so the error
> message will look more familiar.
Sure.
> Since the fields are actual record fields, maybe they can be marked
> up with @code{}?
Good hint.
> Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
> maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
> packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
> configuration.
>
> Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell
> ont
> été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
> @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
> effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."
Have you checked how that renders?
>
Cheers
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-02-27 5:22 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 26+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-02-25 17:58 [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 0/2] Add entries for important gnome-team changes Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-25 17:55 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-26 4:07 ` Maxim Cournoyer
2024-02-25 17:56 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-26 4:09 ` Maxim Cournoyer
2024-02-26 6:15 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 0/2] Slightly better news for GNOME Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-25 17:55 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-25 17:56 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH gnome-team v2 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-26 19:48 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 0/3] *** SUBJECT HERE *** Liliana Marie Prikler
2024-02-25 17:55 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type Vivien Kraus
2024-02-25 17:56 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland Vivien Kraus
2024-02-27 8:29 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
2024-02-27 8:33 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
2024-02-26 19:46 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service Liliana Marie Prikler
2024-02-26 20:28 ` Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
2024-02-27 5:19 ` Liliana Marie Prikler [this message]
2024-02-27 8:21 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
2024-02-27 2:07 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 0/3] gnome-team news entries Hilton Chain via Guix-patches via
2024-02-27 17:56 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v4 0/3] Updated news with your suggestions Liliana Marie Prikler
2024-02-25 17:55 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v4 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type Vivien Kraus
2024-02-25 17:56 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland Vivien Kraus
2024-02-27 19:54 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
2024-02-28 7:18 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
2024-03-28 19:52 ` bug#69392: " Liliana Marie Prikler
2024-02-26 19:46 ` [bug#69392] [PATCH v4 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service Liliana Marie Prikler
2024-02-27 18:06 ` Vivien Kraus via Guix-patches via
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