[bug#39752] [PATCH 0/4 shepherd] Update the doc and an example.

[bug#39752] [PATCH 0/4 shepherd] Update the doc and an example.

[Brice Waegeneire]

Brice Waegeneire (4):
  doc: Fix typos.
  service: Fix typos.
  doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.
  doc: Fix wolfgangj example.

 doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm   |  4 +++-
 doc/shepherd.texi            | 24 +++++++++++++++++-------
 modules/shepherd/service.scm |  4 ++--
 3 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 1/4] doc: Fix typos.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/shepherd.texi (Jump start): Lower case after a colon. Remove
"the".
---
 doc/shepherd.texi | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/shepherd.texi b/doc/shepherd.texi
index da5718b..834d47a 100644
--- a/doc/shepherd.texi
+++ b/doc/shepherd.texi
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ service, you use the following, probably not very surprising, command:
 herd stop networking
 @end example
 
-There are two more actions you can perform on every service: The
+There are two more actions you can perform on every service: the
 actions @code{enable} and @code{disable} are used to prevent and allow
 starting of the particular service.  If a service is intended to be
 restarted whenever it terminates (how this can be done will not be
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ be available:
 herd reload-modules apache
 @end example
 
-The service-specific actions can only be used when the service is
+Service-specific actions can only be used when the service is
 started, i.e. the only thing you can do to a stopped service is
 starting it.  An exception exists, see below.  (If you may at some
 point find this too restrictive because you want to use variants of
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 2/4] service: Fix typos.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* modules/shepherd/service.scm (root-service): Replace "safe" by "save".
---
 modules/shepherd/service.scm | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/shepherd/service.scm b/modules/shepherd/service.scm
index e0772e8..fc82cc4 100644
--- a/modules/shepherd/service.scm
+++ b/modules/shepherd/service.scm
@@ -1392,7 +1392,7 @@ we want to receive these signals."
                  #t)
                (primitive-exit 0))))))
      (persistency
-      "Safe the current state of running and non-running services.
+      "Save the current state of running and non-running services.
 This status gets written into a file on termination, so that we can
 restore the status on next startup.  Optionally, you can pass a file
 name as argument that will be used to store the status."
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ name as argument that will be used to store the status."
                (when file
                  (set! persistency-state-file file))))
      (no-persistency
-      "Don't safe state in a file on exit."
+      "Don't save state in a file on exit."
       (lambda (running)
 	(set! persistency #f)))
      (cd
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 3/4] doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/shepherd.texi (Jump start): Rewrite paragraph about special action
'doc'.
---
 doc/shepherd.texi | 20 +++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/shepherd.texi b/doc/shepherd.texi
index 834d47a..7c7e5e5 100644
--- a/doc/shepherd.texi
+++ b/doc/shepherd.texi
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 @copying
 Copyright @copyright{} @value{OLD-YEARS} Wolfgang J@"ahrling@*
 Copyright @copyright{} @value{NEW-YEARS} Ludovic Courtès
+Copyright @copyright{} @value{2020} Brice Waegeneire
 
 Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
 under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.3 or
@@ -273,11 +274,6 @@ about the service, like what it provides, what it depends on and with which
 other services it conflicts (because they provide a virtual service that is
 also provided by that particular service).
 
-Another special action is @code{list-actions}, which displays a list
-of the additional actions a service provides; obviously, it can also
-be called when the service is not running.  Services cannot provide
-their own implementation of @code{list-actions}.
-
 A special service is @code{root}, which is used for controlling the
 Shepherd itself.  You can also reference to this service as
 @code{shepherd}.  It implements various actions.  For example, the
@@ -293,6 +289,20 @@ to load arbitrary code into the Shepherd at runtime, like this:
 herd load shepherd ~/additional-services.scm
 @end example
 
+In the same vein the special action @code{doc} describes it's service
+when called without an argument or describes a service-specific action
+when called with the action as the additional arguments. You can even
+get the list of the service-specific actions a service provides when
+using with the additional argument @code{list-actions}.
+@example
+$ herd doc root
+The root service is used to operate on shepherd itself.
+$ herd doc root list-actions
+root (help status halt power-off load eval unload reload daemonize persistency no-persistency cd restart)
+$ herd doc root action power-off
+power-off: Halt the system and turn it off.
+@end example
+
 This is enough now about the @command{herd} and @command{shepherd} programs, we
 will now take a look at how to configure the Shepherd.  In the configuration
 file, we need mainly the definition of services.  We can also do
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 3/4] doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.

[Danny Milosavljevic]

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> +In the same vein the special action @code{doc} describes it's service

Should be "its"

> +when called without an argument or describes a service-specific action
> +when called with the action as the additional arguments. You can even
> +get the list of the service-specific actions a service provides when
> +using with the additional argument @code{list-actions}.

Please use two spaces at the beginning of sentences.

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[bug#39752] [PATCH 3/4] doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.

[Brice Waegeneire]

On 2020-02-23 12:49, Danny Milosavljevic wrote:
>> +In the same vein the special action @code{doc} describes it's service
> 
> Should be "its"
> 
>> +when called without an argument or describes a service-specific 
>> action
>> +when called with the action as the additional arguments. You can even
>> +get the list of the service-specific actions a service provides when
>> +using with the additional argument @code{list-actions}.
> 
> Please use two spaces at the beginning of sentences.
I have fix these issues in v2.

[bug#39752] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Fix wolfgangj example.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm: Use module SRFI-1. Replace "dmd" by "shepherd".
---
 doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm b/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
index 0c16108..5fae7c1 100644
--- a/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
+++ b/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
@@ -26,6 +26,8 @@
 ;; Apache running when I am online, I made Apache conflict with the
 ;; ISDN setup.
 
+(use-modules (srfi srfi-1))
+
 ;; Laziness.
 (define (number->symbol num)
   (string->symbol (number->string num)))
@@ -122,7 +124,7 @@
   (loop default-terms))
 
 ;; Go into background.
-(action 'dmd 'daemonize)
+(action 'shepherd 'daemonize)
 
 ;; Setup internet, a mailer and a few terms.
 (for-each start
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 0/5 shepherd v2] Update the doc and an example.

[Brice Waegeneire]

Add commit #5 and fix typos in commit #3.

Brice Waegeneire (5):
  doc: Fix typos.
  service: Fix typos.
  doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.
  doc: Fix wolfgangj example.
  .dir-locals.el: End sentence with a double space.

 .dir-locals.el               |  1 +
 doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm   |  4 +++-
 doc/shepherd.texi            | 24 +++++++++++++++++-------
 modules/shepherd/service.scm |  4 ++--
 4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 1/5] doc: Fix typos.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/shepherd.texi (Jump start): Lower case after a colon. Remove
"the".
---
 doc/shepherd.texi | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/shepherd.texi b/doc/shepherd.texi
index da5718b..834d47a 100644
--- a/doc/shepherd.texi
+++ b/doc/shepherd.texi
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ service, you use the following, probably not very surprising, command:
 herd stop networking
 @end example
 
-There are two more actions you can perform on every service: The
+There are two more actions you can perform on every service: the
 actions @code{enable} and @code{disable} are used to prevent and allow
 starting of the particular service.  If a service is intended to be
 restarted whenever it terminates (how this can be done will not be
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ be available:
 herd reload-modules apache
 @end example
 
-The service-specific actions can only be used when the service is
+Service-specific actions can only be used when the service is
 started, i.e. the only thing you can do to a stopped service is
 starting it.  An exception exists, see below.  (If you may at some
 point find this too restrictive because you want to use variants of
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 2/5] service: Fix typos.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* modules/shepherd/service.scm (root-service): Replace "safe" by "save".
---
 modules/shepherd/service.scm | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/shepherd/service.scm b/modules/shepherd/service.scm
index e0772e8..fc82cc4 100644
--- a/modules/shepherd/service.scm
+++ b/modules/shepherd/service.scm
@@ -1392,7 +1392,7 @@ we want to receive these signals."
                  #t)
                (primitive-exit 0))))))
      (persistency
-      "Safe the current state of running and non-running services.
+      "Save the current state of running and non-running services.
 This status gets written into a file on termination, so that we can
 restore the status on next startup.  Optionally, you can pass a file
 name as argument that will be used to store the status."
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ name as argument that will be used to store the status."
                (when file
                  (set! persistency-state-file file))))
      (no-persistency
-      "Don't safe state in a file on exit."
+      "Don't save state in a file on exit."
       (lambda (running)
 	(set! persistency #f)))
      (cd
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 3/5] doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/shepherd.texi (Jump start): Rewrite paragraph about special action
'doc'.
---
 doc/shepherd.texi | 20 +++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/shepherd.texi b/doc/shepherd.texi
index 834d47a..fbd1a3f 100644
--- a/doc/shepherd.texi
+++ b/doc/shepherd.texi
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 @copying
 Copyright @copyright{} @value{OLD-YEARS} Wolfgang J@"ahrling@*
 Copyright @copyright{} @value{NEW-YEARS} Ludovic Courtès
+Copyright @copyright{} @value{2020} Brice Waegeneire
 
 Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
 under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.3 or
@@ -273,11 +274,6 @@ about the service, like what it provides, what it depends on and with which
 other services it conflicts (because they provide a virtual service that is
 also provided by that particular service).
 
-Another special action is @code{list-actions}, which displays a list
-of the additional actions a service provides; obviously, it can also
-be called when the service is not running.  Services cannot provide
-their own implementation of @code{list-actions}.
-
 A special service is @code{root}, which is used for controlling the
 Shepherd itself.  You can also reference to this service as
 @code{shepherd}.  It implements various actions.  For example, the
@@ -293,6 +289,20 @@ to load arbitrary code into the Shepherd at runtime, like this:
 herd load shepherd ~/additional-services.scm
 @end example
 
+In the same vein the special action @code{doc} describes it service when
+called without an argument or describes a service-specific action when
+called with the action as the additional arguments.  You can even get
+the list of the service-specific actions a service provides when using
+with the additional argument @code{list-actions}.
+@example
+$ herd doc root
+The root service is used to operate on shepherd itself.
+$ herd doc root list-actions
+root (help status halt power-off load eval unload reload daemonize persistency no-persistency cd restart)
+$ herd doc root action power-off
+power-off: Halt the system and turn it off.
+@end example
+
 This is enough now about the @command{herd} and @command{shepherd} programs, we
 will now take a look at how to configure the Shepherd.  In the configuration
 file, we need mainly the definition of services.  We can also do
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 4/5] doc: Fix wolfgangj example.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm: Use module SRFI-1. Replace "dmd" by "shepherd".
---
 doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm b/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
index 0c16108..5fae7c1 100644
--- a/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
+++ b/doc/examples/wolfgangj.scm
@@ -26,6 +26,8 @@
 ;; Apache running when I am online, I made Apache conflict with the
 ;; ISDN setup.
 
+(use-modules (srfi srfi-1))
+
 ;; Laziness.
 (define (number->symbol num)
   (string->symbol (number->string num)))
@@ -122,7 +124,7 @@
   (loop default-terms))
 
 ;; Go into background.
-(action 'dmd 'daemonize)
+(action 'shepherd 'daemonize)
 
 ;; Setup internet, a mailer and a few terms.
 (for-each start
-- 
2.25.0

[bug#39752] [PATCH 5/5] .dir-locals.el: End sentence with a double space.

[Brice Waegeneire]

* .dir-locals.el (nil): Add variable 'sentence-end-double-space'.
---
 .dir-locals.el | 1 +
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+)

diff --git a/.dir-locals.el b/.dir-locals.el
index ff25997..8361cb6 100644
--- a/.dir-locals.el
+++ b/.dir-locals.el
@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
 ((nil
   . ((fill-column . 78)
      (tab-width   .  8)
+     (sentence-end-double-space . t)
 
      ;; For use with 'bug-reference-prog-mode'.
      (bug-reference-url-format . "http://bugs.gnu.org/%s")
-- 
2.25.0

bug#39752: [PATCH 0/5 shepherd v2] Update the doc and an example.

[Ludovic Courtès]

Hello,

Brice Waegeneire <brice@waegenei.re> skribis:

> Add commit #5 and fix typos in commit #3.
>
> Brice Waegeneire (5):
>   doc: Fix typos.
>   service: Fix typos.
>   doc: Expand the part on special action 'doc'.
>   doc: Fix wolfgangj example.
>   .dir-locals.el: End sentence with a double space.

I’ve pushed these patches.

Thanks for these improvements Brice, and thanks for the initial review,
Danny!

Ludo’.