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From: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic Courtès)
To: Danny Milosavljevic <dannym@scratchpost.org>
Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] gnu: Add sunxi-tools.
Date: Tue, 04 Oct 2016 15:15:39 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87vax88dc4.fsf@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20161004120738.2351b604@scratchpost.org> (Danny Milosavljevic's message of "Tue, 4 Oct 2016 12:07:38 +0200")

Danny Milosavljevic <dannym@scratchpost.org> skribis:

>> I don’t understand this description.  Since “Tools”, “manage”, and
>> “devices” could mean anything, could you add qualifiers to give more
>> context, like:
>> 
>>   “Frobbing tools for Allwinner A10 foobar devices”
>> 
>> and similarly expound the description (with a period at the end of the
>> sentence)?
>> 
>> Based on that, we might device that admin.scm is not the best fit for
>> this package.  Maybe flashing-tools.scm?
>
> The tools included are:

I’m not asking that you explain it to me personally ;-), but rather that
the description conveys a message that makes sense both for the domain
expert and the passerby.

  https://www.gnu.org/software/guix/manual/html_node/Synopses-and-Descriptions.html

> So how about this description:
>
>     (description "This package contains tools for Allwinner A10 devices:
> - sunxi-fexc, bin2fex, fex2bin: Compile a textual description of a board (.fex) to a binary representation (.bin).
> - sunxi-fel: Puts a Allwinner A10 device into FEL mode which makes it register as a special USB device (rather than USB host). You can then connect it to another computer and flash it from there.
> - sunxi-nand-part: Partitions NAND flash.
> - sunxi-bootinfo: Reads out boot0 and boot1 information. These are the bootloaders before U-Boot.
> - sunxi-pio: Sets GPIO and oscillates a GPIO in order to be able to find it.
> ")

Sure.  Make sure to use @enumerate/@item for the list, and @command for
the command names.

This still doesn’t address the synopsis issue as I wrote above.  What
about this synopsis:

  Hardware management tools for Allwinner A10 single-board computers

?

Please send a patch the addresses this and I’ll happily apply it!

Ludo’.

  reply	other threads:[~2016-10-04 13:15 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 12+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-09-29 11:02 [PATCH] gnu: Add sunxi-tools Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-02  1:54 ` Leo Famulari
2016-10-02  9:54   ` Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-02  9:57     ` Vincent Legoll
2016-10-02 10:01       ` Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-02  9:58     ` [PATCH v2] " Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-04  9:19       ` Ludovic Courtès
2016-10-04 10:07         ` Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-04 13:15           ` Ludovic Courtès [this message]
2016-10-04 14:38             ` Vincent Legoll
2016-10-05  3:03             ` [PATCH v3] " Danny Milosavljevic
2016-10-05 16:51               ` Ludovic Courtès

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