> This LGTM except ... the first paragraphs (quoted below) are an > advertisement. This is out of place in a tutorial. So, IMO, they should > simply be removed. It's a tutorial addressed to newcomers, so I believe it's important that we mention (or remind?) what Guix can do, because this is precisely what we are tackling in this tutorial. I don't think it's a problem, actually I think it's necessary as part of the introduction. Opinions, anyone? I'm not opposed to swapping both paragraphs however. -- Pierre Neidhardt https://ambrevar.xyz/