From: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic Courtès)
To: Alex Sassmannshausen <alex.sassmannshausen@gmail.com>
Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: dmd: Some improvements to the dmd manual
Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2014 14:11:42 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <87r47yg7w1.fsf@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1390464950-5967-1-git-send-email-alex.sassmannshausen@gmail.com> (Alex Sassmannshausen's message of "Thu, 23 Jan 2014 09:15:49 +0100")
Hi!
Alex Sassmannshausen <alex.sassmannshausen@gmail.com> skribis:
> I'm assuming that dmd contributions go to the guix list for now.
Yep.
> Attached a patch introducing some changes to the dmd manual — the
> patch only covers the Introduction section for now as I wanted to
> submit something with my approach early to know whether it is
> acceptable.
>
> As you can see it's a bit of a rewrite, but I think the English is
> overall easier to understand.
Yes, that makes sense.
> Let me know if you think I should ba approaching this differently.
I will comment on the first patch, but what specific points do you want
to address more generally? Is it more about wording, structure, guiding
the user? (I can see some of that in the first patch.)
Thank you!
Ludo’.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2014-01-23 13:16 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2014-01-23 8:15 dmd: Some improvements to the dmd manual Alex Sassmannshausen
2014-01-23 8:15 ` [PATCH] Doc: Introduction: rewrite for style and clarity Alex Sassmannshausen
2014-01-23 13:30 ` Ludovic Courtès
2014-01-23 18:00 ` (unknown), Alex Sassmannshausen
2014-01-23 18:00 ` [PATCH] Doc: Introduction: rewrite for style and clarity Alex Sassmannshausen
2014-01-24 17:11 ` Ludovic Courtès
2014-01-23 13:11 ` Ludovic Courtès [this message]
2014-01-23 15:09 ` dmd: Some improvements to the dmd manual Alex Sassmannshausen
2014-01-24 12:52 ` Ludovic Courtès
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