From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Roel Janssen Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: Small fixes for typos and missing words. Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 15:10:51 +0200 Message-ID: <87poucru04.fsf@gnu.org> References: <87r3esrvk8.fsf@gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="=-=-=" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:48711) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFtP-0000Sz-09 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 09:10:40 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFtK-00067C-Kq for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 09:10:38 -0400 In-reply-to: List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Ricardo Wurmus Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org --=-=-= Content-Type: text/x-patch Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=0001-doc-Small-fixes-for-typos-and-missing-words.patch >From 467315651e27c3ce3059b9fca38494879de50e5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Roel Janssen Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 14:27:52 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] doc: Small fixes for typos and missing words. * doc/guix.texi (The Store Monad): Add a dot at the end of a sentence. (The Store Monad): Add "are" to make a complete sentence. (G-Expressions): Fix typo. --- doc/guix.texi | 54 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi index 1a7f188..2407a41 100644 --- a/doc/guix.texi +++ b/doc/guix.texi @@ -3245,7 +3291,7 @@ provides a framework for working with @dfn{monads}, and a particularly useful monad for our uses, the @dfn{store monad}. Monads are a construct that allows two things: associating ``context'' with values (in our case, the context is the store), and building sequences of -computations (here computations include accesses to the store.) Values +computations (here computations include accesses to the store). Values in a monad---values that carry this additional context---are called @dfn{monadic values}; procedures that return such values are called @dfn{monadic procedures}. @@ -3274,7 +3320,7 @@ as a monadic function: #$output)))) @end example -There several things to note in the second version: the @code{store} +There are several things to note in the second version: the @code{store} parameter is now implicit and is ``threaded'' in the calls to the @code{package->derivation} and @code{gexp->derivation} monadic procedures, and the monadic value returned by @code{package->derivation} @@ -3541,7 +3587,7 @@ S-expressions adapted to build expressions. G-expressions, or @code{ungexp}, and @code{ungexp-splicing} (or simply: @code{#~}, @code{#$}, and @code{#$@@}), which are comparable to @code{quasiquote}, @code{unquote}, and @code{unquote-splicing}, -respectivel (@pxref{Expression Syntax, @code{quasiquote},, guile, +respectively (@pxref{Expression Syntax, @code{quasiquote},, guile, GNU Guile Reference Manual}). However, there are major differences: @itemize -- 2.5.5 --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain Ricardo Wurmus writes: > Roel Janssen writes: > >> Dear Guix, >> >> I noticed some typos and/or missing words when reading parts of the >> manual. Instead of leaving it be, I attached a patch to fix them. >> >> I don't know how my commit message should look like in this case, so >> please let me know when it is wrong. > > I think the first fix should be this: > > -computations (here computations include accesses to the store.) Values > +computations (here computations include accesses to the store). Values > > rather than having a period both in and outside the parentheses. Yes, that is nicer. Attached the modified patch. Kind regards, Roel Janssen --=-=-=--