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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -9.57 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx11.migadu.com X-Spam-Score: -9.57 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: D136FEAC5 X-TUID: lKREfoN2Q5ne Hi, Matt skribis: > See @ref{Substitutes} for how to allow the daemon to download pre-built b= inaries. Nitpick: this works but I believe the recommended approach is =E2=80=9C@xref{Substitutes} for how=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9D. https://www.gnu.org/software/texinfo/manual/texinfo/html_node/Cross-Refer= ence-Commands.html Thanks for reporting these issues! Ludo=E2=80=99.