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Subject: Re: [PATCH 5/6] gnu: Add gnome-desktop.
Date: Sat, 30 Nov 2013 23:07:55 +0100
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Cyril Roelandt <tipecaml@gmail.com> skribis:

> * gnu/packages/gnome.scm (gnome-desktop): New variable.

OK, but:

> +    (synopsis
> +     "The libgnome-desktop library, the gnome-about program and some
> +desktop-wide documents.")

should be a short phrase, not a sentence, and one that does not repeat
the package name, like: =E2=80=9Clibgnome-desktop, gnome-about, and desktop=
-wide
documents=E2=80=9D.

Thanks!

Ludo=E2=80=99.