From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Ricardo Wurmus Subject: Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter. Date: Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200 Message-ID: <87eght5bvr.fsf@elephly.net> References: <8761377ct3.fsf@elephly.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:43892) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZdgsG-00051g-9f for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sun, 20 Sep 2015 11:49:56 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZdgsB-0005a3-5Q for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sun, 20 Sep 2015 11:49:56 -0400 Received: from sender163-mail.zoho.com ([74.201.84.163]:25858) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZdgsA-0005Zn-T4 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sun, 20 Sep 2015 11:49:51 -0400 In-reply-to: <8761377ct3.fsf@elephly.net> List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: guix-devel On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it should have been, so here’s another attempt: "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and attractive physics. Players can battle each other or computer controlled enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit." * “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”. * “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it surely is not “realistic”. * “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...” What do you think? ~~ Ricardo