Marco van Hulten <marco@hulten.org> writes:
> I guess this will be part of the Guix manual (or maybe the above URL is
> solid enough), so improvements are welcome?

Improvements are always welcome!  That said, the tutorial will not become part
of the manual.  We've discussed this before, and the consensus was that this
tutorial is mostly about putting together some parts of the manual in an
accessible way to get newcomers started.

It's completely redundant with the manual, so there is no need to move it there.

> I have minor things (not useful for — so I didn't post to — the list):
>
>   specific case that the output tells → specific case the output tells
>   if none at all → if at all  [or remove]

Thanks for spotting this!
I've committed the changes.  Ludo, can you update the blog?

> Please, let me know if I should report changes differently.

This is the right way to do it for blog posts.
The blog is hosted there:

	https://git.savannah.gnu.org/git/guix/guix-artwork.git

Thanks again!

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Pierre Neidhardt
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