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On 2015-10-22 at 10:47, quoth ericbavier@openmailbox.org:
>> +    (synopsis
>> +     "Help writing simple, concise and fast generic operations")
>
> How about: "Simple, concise, and fast generic operations"

Changed.

>> +    (description "Uniplate is library for writing simple and concise generic
>
> Uniplate is _a_ library...

Good catch, thanks.

>> +operations.  Uniplate has similar goals to the original Scrap Your Boilerplate
>> +work, but is substantially simpler and faster.")
>
>        ^---- I believe this comma is grammatically unnecessary.

Without the comma, i find the sentence a bit breathless.

p.