From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Tobias Geerinckx-Rice Subject: Re: We need your feedback of the documentation videos! Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2019 17:03:40 +0200 Message-ID: <87blxbftty.fsf@nckx> References: <87d0i9gfme.fsf@elephly.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="=-=-="; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]:40390) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.86_2) (envelope-from ) id 1hsTfP-0000fg-0E for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 30 Jul 2019 11:03:56 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1hsTfL-0001hU-Tn for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 30 Jul 2019 11:03:54 -0400 Received: from tobias.gr ([2001:470:7405::1]:54196) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:DHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:32) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1hsTfJ-0001fW-Hn for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 30 Jul 2019 11:03:51 -0400 In-reply-to: List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "Guix-devel" To: guix-devel@gnu.org, Laura Lazzati --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Laura, I've finally watched these videos and can only agree that they=20 look (and sound) very nice. I watched them with the archive.org=20 player in IceCat on a Guix System. Laura Lazzati =E5=86=99=E9=81=93=EF=BC=9A > Does anybody else want to say something about the videos? :) Some things I noticed and that (I think) Ricardo hasn't mentioned=20 yet. I know video is a lot of work, sorry for suggesting more. 01-installation-from-script: =2D 01:25 =E2=80=98The output tells us the signature is good.=E2=80=99 This made me chuckle: in typical GPG fashion, everything in its=20 output implies the opposite unless you're already familiar with=20 it. I realise it's far too late to touch the audio. Could we=20 highlight =E2=80=98public key =E2=80=A6 imported=E2=80=99 after half a se= cond or so?=20 I don't know if the scripts allow easy highlighting of output=20 text like that. =2D 01:35 and later: Our homepage has changed. Presumably as simple=20 as running a search & replace on the repo before the videos are=20 generated for the reals. 02-everyday-use-part-one: =2D 01:40 =E2=80=98we have our locales, that belong in the configuration of= =20 our system=E2=80=99 sounds wrong to me. Is it possible to cut after=20 =E2=80=98locales=E2=80=99? Or am I misunderstanding what is meant? =2D 02:40 There's enough space to have the =E2=80=98user=E2=80=99 type some= thing=20 like =E2=80=98guix install foobar:gui=E2=80=99 while talking about output= s=20 (without showing the result of that command). 02-everyday-use-part-two: =2D 0:25 =E2=80=98package/s=E2=80=99 needlessly caught my attention (I'd ex= pect=20 =E2=80=98package(s)=E2=80=99) but this might be a regional thing. Same f= or=20 =E2=80=98latest Guix version\ninstalled=E2=80=99 (=E2=80=98latest install= ed Guix=20 version=E2=80=99). =2D 0:25 I agree that the second =E2=80=98guix pull=E2=80=99 looks odd (and= =20 cramped). You could replace the vertical arrow with =E2=80=98&&=E2=80=99= or=20 add a =E2=80=98then=E2=80=99 as done in the next slide. =2D After dropping it, you'll have room to add =E2=80=98[regex]=E2=80=99 to= the=20 end of =E2=80=98guix package --upgrade=E2=80=99 and help combat a common= =20 misunderstanding :-) There's room even if you don't. All videos: =2D The empty line between commands and their output (but none the=20 between the output and the next command) looks strange to me.=20 There should either be no empty line (as in a real shell) or=20 another one before the next command for visual clarity. Now I need a break, because I'm that grumpy person who never=20 watches videos for technical information. Thank you, again, T G-R --=-=-= Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEARYKAB0WIQT12iAyS4c9C3o4dnINsP+IT1VteQUCXUBcTAAKCRANsP+IT1Vt eSuLAP9AE7fFKeQdHbWP1cO4eGf8VrcGczYmU8eBRxjCkb5YGwD/VAnb6BFlAB3+ ZrWEroxybYsyxo26ylKsjxXfxHozSAI= =tQ52 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-=-=--