From aac8f6d1fb382b9f9120b7cd51dc80e8ef07cc03 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Josefsson Date: Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:35:15 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] website: Reduce use of 'advanced' term. --- website/apps/base/templates/about.scm | 4 ++-- website/apps/base/templates/home.scm | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm b/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm index 9e2d252..1cf2f65 100644 --- a/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm +++ b/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ (theme #:title (C_ "webpage title" '("About")) #:description - (G_ "Guix is an advanced distribution of the GNU operating system. + (G_ "Guix is a distribution of the GNU operating system. Guix is technology that respects the freedom of computer users. You are free to run the system for any purpose, study how it works, improve it, and share it with the whole world.") @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ system|GNU Hurd|GNU Guix package manager") #\|) ,(G_ `(p - "Guix System is an advanced distribution of the " + "Guix System is a distribution of the " ,(G_ `(a (@ (href ,(gnu-url))) "GNU operating system")) ". It uses the " ,(G_ `(a (@ (href ,(gnu-url "software/linux-libre"))) "Linux-libre")) diff --git a/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm b/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm index 7b72da8..8a0bccd 100644 --- a/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm +++ b/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ "Return the Home page in SHTML using the data in CONTEXT." (theme #:title (C_ "webpage title" - '("GNU's advanced distro and transactional package manager")) + '("GNU Guix transactional package manager and distribution")) #:description - (G_ "Guix is an advanced distribution of the GNU operating system. + (G_ "Guix is a distribution of the GNU operating system. Guix is technology that respects the freedom of computer users. You are free to run the system for any purpose, study how it works, improve it, and share it with the whole world.") @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ management|Reproducibility") #\|) ,(G_ `(li ,(G_ `(b "Liberating.")) - " Guix is an advanced distribution of the " + " Guix is a distribution of the " ,(G_ (link-yellow #:label "GNU operating system" #:url (gnu-url "gnu/about-gnu.html"))) -- 2.30.2