Re: [PATCH, WIP] new variable: redshift

[Florian Paul Schmidt <mista.tapas@gmx.net>]

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On 11/25/2015 01:47 PM, Ludovic Courtès wrote:

> I see your redshift package is also slightly more elaborate.  Would
> you like to submit it (or Florian can incorporate the differences)?
> Here are some comments:
> 
>> +    (synopsis +     "Adjusts the color temperature of your
>> screen + according to your surroundings")
> 
> Rather “Adjust your screen's color temperature”.
> 
>> +    (description +     "This may help your eyes hurt less if you
>> are working +in front of the screen at night.")
> 
> What about:
> 
> “Redshift adjust your screen's color temperature according to your 
> environment.  This may help make your eyes hurt less, for instance 
> when working in front of the screen at night.”

Sure. I stuck to the text from the github project's README.md. Might
not be the best decision :)

> 
> ?
> 
>> +    (license license:gpl3)))
> 
> The source file headers carry the “or later” clause, so this should
> be ‘gplv3+’.

OK, I must have missed that since I just looked in the original
COPYING file.

If Jeff wants to submit his version that's super cool. Less work for
me. I'm lazy..

Flo





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