From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Andreas Enge Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/1] gnu: util-linux: Make description more descriptive. Date: Mon, 7 Dec 2015 20:44:21 +0100 Message-ID: <20151207194421.GA5685@debian> References: <3a4883bf5cf54f336883daf8a164cb3e037961f4.1449517268.git.leo@famulari.name> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:55069) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1a61i4-0004VK-Co for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Dec 2015 14:44:36 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1a61i0-0001Bm-DQ for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Dec 2015 14:44:32 -0500 Received: from mout.kundenserver.de ([217.72.192.73]:55562) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1a61i0-0001BV-3K for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 07 Dec 2015 14:44:28 -0500 Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <3a4883bf5cf54f336883daf8a164cb3e037961f4.1449517268.git.leo@famulari.name> List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Leo Famulari Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org On Mon, Dec 07, 2015 at 02:42:02PM -0500, Leo Famulari wrote: > - "Util-linux is a random collection of utilities for the Linux kernel.") > + (description "A diverse collection of Linux kernel utilities. It provides > +dmesg and includes tools for working with filesystems, block devices, UUIDs, > +TTYs, and many other tools.") Descriptions should consist of complete sentences. So the first words should remain as "Util-linux provides a ...". Andreas