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From: Eric Bavier <ericbavier@openmailbox.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 2015 15:19:09 -0500
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On Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200
Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net> wrote:

> On IRC I was told that the description wasn=E2=80=99t quite as neutral as=
 it
> should have been, so here=E2=80=99s another attempt:
>=20
>        "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and
> attractive physics.  Players can battle each other or computer controlled
> enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team dea=
th
> match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit."
>=20
> * =E2=80=9Cpretty visual effects=E2=80=9D rather than =E2=80=9Cawesome vi=
sual effects=E2=80=9D.
> * =E2=80=9Cattractive physics=E2=80=9D =E2=80=94 I could not think of a m=
ore appropriate term; it
>   surely is not =E2=80=9Crealistic=E2=80=9D.
> * =E2=80=9Cexciting game modes=E2=80=9D has become =E2=80=9Cdifferent gam=
e modes such as ...=E2=80=9D
>=20
> What do you think?

This version seems more appropriate to me.  Thanks!

`~Eric