From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Andreas Enge Subject: Re: Talk for the GHM Date: Thu, 18 Jul 2013 20:50:19 +0200 Message-ID: <201307182050.19883.andreas@enge.fr> References: <87txjslv64.fsf@gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:38119) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1UztHY-0008QV-Dl for guix-devel@gnu.org; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 14:50:31 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1UztHV-0002wD-Up for guix-devel@gnu.org; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 14:50:28 -0400 Received: from moutng.kundenserver.de ([212.227.17.9]:61371) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1UztHV-0002w4-MP for guix-devel@gnu.org; Thu, 18 Jul 2013 14:50:25 -0400 In-Reply-To: <87txjslv64.fsf@gnu.org> List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: guix-devel@gnu.org Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzwords. Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Court=C3=A8s: > This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we=E2= =80=99ve > got toward this mission, "come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives:=20 "show" instead of "showing". > and showing off with a demo. "give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"? Andreas