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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -5.59 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx11.migadu.com X-Spam-Score: -5.59 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 82AAB3B351 X-TUID: TkWCcAubjZ2S ---- On Fri, 19 Apr 2024 22:56:13 +0200 pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote= ---=20 > Hello Matt, pushed as 86fb0e039bf30cf85e2066401f9a384427c47ea8. >=20 > I was bold enough to retain the xref change in (Setting Up the Daemon) > prompted by Ludo, because starting a sentence with @xref is recommended > in the Texinfo manual and its examples, while @pxref at the start of a > phrase is not preferrable, according to the =E2=80=9Cinfo "(texinfo)@pxr= ef"=E2=80=9D. >=20 > Again, Texinfo cross-references are complicated. >=20 > (In the German translations, I always wrote only @ref, but only because > @xref is not properly translated; Emacs in particular is not > internationalized at all.) =20 Sounds good, thank you!