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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Reply-To: matt@excalamus.com Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -8.57 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx11.migadu.com X-Spam-Score: -8.57 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: D29A870FE2 X-TUID: 5DyG8+48XWJU ---- On Sat, 13 Apr 2024 13:26:39 +0200 pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote= ---=20 > @xref produces a capital See instead of see. This should be @pxref. > See the Texinfo manual =E2=80=9Cinfo texinfo=E2=80=9D or the Web manual = Ludo points to. >=20 > In info, this will use the word *note instead of *see, but it=E2=80=99s = still > right, if Matt you agree. Yes, rereading the linked docs, it is as you say. =20 The problem is that the Emacs Info reader incorrectly renders cross-referen= ces by default. I was reading the Texinfo documentation in Emacs. The default Emacs rendering of the Texinfo info file looks like: #+begin_src info =E2=80=98@xref=E2=80=99 Used to start a sentence with an Info cross-reference saying =E2=80=98= see NAME.=E2=80=99 or with 'See ...' in other output formats. =E2=80=98@ref=E2=80=99 Used within or, more often, at the end of a sentence; produces an Info cross-reference saying =E2=80=98see NAME.=E2=80=99, and just the reference in other output formats, without the preceding 'See'. =20 #+end_src Specifically, it misleadingly replaces info file instances of "*Note", whic= h correspond to @xref, with (lowercase 's') "see ". A workaround is use (setq Info-hide-note-references nil) I was unable to fix the issue in Emacs and have filed a bug report. > Additionally, the commit message=E2=80=99s first sentence should end wit= h a > period. The sentences in the commit message describing a section should > start with a capital letter. Thank you for the reminder. I have made a note to check this for my future= submissions.