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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -7.44 X-Spam-Score: -7.44 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: C51ED15FE0 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx13.migadu.com X-TUID: JL+INozs28WZ ------=_Part_1539855_1518838356.1712949528750 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit We're working through a list of feedback one item at a time: https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-devel/2024-01/msg00117.html We have completed the first three items. The next item reported is: #+begin_quote 3.7 After System Installation L27 Libera_Chat, why the underscore. It is colored as well for me so I guess this is a special char. Should be anways just Libera Chat #+end_quote "Libera_Chat" is not, or no longer, in the docs (d3fe763fe3). However, there are two variations present: "Libera Chat" and "Libera.Chat". The attached change updates "Libera Chat" to the "Libera.Chat" stylization. The network itself is inconsistent in self-reference and provides no guideline I could find on which form to use. I opted for the "dot" version to make things consistent. 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