From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: =?UTF-8?q?Tom=C3=A1=C5=A1=20=C4=8Cech?= Subject: EFL, elementary, loaders, players and terminology - round 2 Date: Sat, 28 Feb 2015 23:11:01 +0100 Message-ID: <1425161466-4681-1-git-send-email-sleep_walker@suse.cz> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:60735) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YRpbQ-0008Jf-BF for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sat, 28 Feb 2015 17:11:17 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YRpbN-0005Rn-5S for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sat, 28 Feb 2015 17:11:16 -0500 Received: from cantor2.suse.de ([195.135.220.15]:33485 helo=mx2.suse.de) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YRpbM-0005RS-VC for guix-devel@gnu.org; Sat, 28 Feb 2015 17:11:13 -0500 Received: from relay1.suse.de (charybdis-ext.suse.de [195.135.220.254]) by mx2.suse.de (Postfix) with ESMTP id A6F4CABED for ; Sat, 28 Feb 2015 22:11:10 +0000 (UTC) List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: guix-devel@gnu.org Hi, thank you for your kind review and your comments. Changes since previous round: - efl.scm renamed to enlightenment.scm - descriptions are descriptive and consist of sentences with punctuation - too long lines were shortened - lonely parens made friends on previous line - removed unnecessary input bash - verified that Makefile.in.in substitution is really needed - added information about reasons for propagated-inputs and improved the list a bit Thanks in advance for another review round. S_W