bug#39681: Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"

bug#39681: Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"

[Jack Hill]

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Tags: easy

Hello Guix,

In the manual section 4.8, "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’", I believe that 
"are passed unmodified to the ‘guix’ command if the specified revision," 
would read better if it said, "to the ‘guix’ command of the specified 
revision."

I've filed this as a bug like #39417 as an easy task for Outreachy 
applicants. Let me know if a patch would be preferred.

Best,
Jack

bug#39681: [Outreachy] Submitting Patch for : Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"

[Naga Malleswari]

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Hi

I have picked up #39681  in  http://issues.guix.gnu.org/easy.
<http://issues.guix.gnu.org/easy>

Made changes to the documentation and submitting the patch. Please
review and suggest any changes.

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Regards
NagaMalli


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From acbdaf012aad78870bcfa51b72faf8f0a3b4c082 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Naga Malleswari <nagamalli@riseup.net>
Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2020 10:50:56 +0530
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typo in syntax description. * doc/guix.texi
 (Invoking guix time-machine): Fix typo 'of' instead of 'if'.

---
 doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 77a4b8ed71..404a3e4777 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -75,6 +75,7 @@ Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Wiktor Żelazny@*
 Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Damien Cassou@*
 Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Jakub Kądziołka@*
 Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Jack Hill@*
+Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Naga Malleswari@*
 
 Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
 under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.3 or
@@ -4207,7 +4208,7 @@ guix time-machine @var{options}@dots{} -- @var{command} @var {arg}@dots{}
 @end example
 
 where @var{command} and @var{arg}@dots{} are passed unmodified to the
-@command{guix} command if the specified revision.  The @var{options} that define
+@command{guix} command of the specified revision.  The @var{options} that define
 this revision are the same as for @command{guix pull} (@pxref{Invoking guix pull}):
 
 @table @code
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2.25.1

bug#39681: [Outreachy] Submitting Patch for : Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"

[Danny Milosavljevic]

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Hi,

thanks for the patch!

Pushed to guix master as commit 022767d7c132d20d684e0dec7c6010fdcf408e3d

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