Re: Guix paper

[ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic Courtès)]

Nikita Karetnikov <nikita@karetnikov.org> skribis:

> Nitpicking:

Thanks for the quick feedback.  I admit I had postponed most the
typographic issues to the final version.  As a Lout user, I was
surprised that LaTeX made so many errors with hyphenations, widows,
etc. by default.

> 1. I think that it would be better to move the Background heading to
>    the next page.  Here is a possible solution: [1].

Doesn’t really work.  I guess it will require manual tweaking.

> 2. This document has a lot of hyphenation problems:

[...]

>      - the "microtype" package [2];

That solves most, but not all problems.  Again, I’ll may have to
manually tweak things for the final version.

>      - use a single column instead of two;

That style is imposed (acmproc.cls).

> 3. Use the "hypcap" option [4].

This had this problem
<http://tug.org/pipermail/texhax/2010-September/015596.html>, but even
then, it broke links.

> 4. Typos:

Fixed.

> 5. Non-breaking space: [5].

Fixed.

> 6. Maybe it would be better not to use underline on the third figure
>    [6].

Fixed.

> 7. I think that the word "hello" (on the third page) should be
>    emphasized with the "texttt" command, not quotation marks.  I also
>    think that the comma should go before the closing quotation mark.
>    But this rule depends on the dialect.

Fixed.

Thanks!

Ludo’.