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From: Danny Milosavljevic <dannym@scratchpost.org>
Subject: bug#27007: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Adapt to multiple bootloader support.
Date: Wed, 31 May 2017 23:57:06 +0200
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To: Mathieu Othacehe <m.othacehe@gmail.com>
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> +Note that all fields of @code{bootloader-configuration} are not
> +necessarily handled by all GuixSD supported bootloaders.

Sounds weird to me.

How about "Note that not all fields of ... are necessarily handled by every GuixSD-supported bootloader" ?

Otherwise LGTM!