* bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation
@ 2016-11-01 17:20 saffronsnail
2016-11-01 19:06 ` Leo Famulari
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From: saffronsnail @ 2016-11-01 17:20 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: 24851
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Hello,
I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small
typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence
reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several
options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments
passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU,
notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after
"QEMU", not after "option".
Thanks for your time,saff
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* bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation
2016-11-01 17:20 bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation saffronsnail
@ 2016-11-01 19:06 ` Leo Famulari
2016-11-01 21:11 ` Ludovic Courtès
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From: Leo Famulari @ 2016-11-01 19:06 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: saffronsnail; +Cc: 24851
On Tue, Nov 01, 2016 at 10:20:55AM -0700, saffronsnail@hushmail.com wrote:
> Hello,
> I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small
> typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence
> reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several
> options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments
> passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU,
> notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after
> "QEMU", not after "option".
> Thanks for your time,saff
Hm, I'm not sure exactly which meaning is intended here.
Does anyone have advice?
Andreas, you made this change in 1068f26b7.
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* bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation
2016-11-01 19:06 ` Leo Famulari
@ 2016-11-01 21:11 ` Ludovic Courtès
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From: Ludovic Courtès @ 2016-11-01 21:11 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: saffronsnail; +Cc: 24851-done
Leo Famulari <leo@famulari.name> skribis:
> On Tue, Nov 01, 2016 at 10:20:55AM -0700, saffronsnail@hushmail.com wrote:
>> Hello,
>> I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small
>> typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence
>> reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several
>> options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments
>> passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU,
>> notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after
>> "QEMU", not after "option".
You are right, I’ll push a fix shortly, thanks!
Ludo’.
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