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From: Andy Wingo <wingo@pobox.com>
To: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic Courtès)
Cc: guile-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: compiler.texi: Compiling to the virtual machine
Date: Thu, 15 Jan 2009 23:03:20 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <m31vv41b2v.fsf@pobox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <87fxjmltab.fsf@gnu.org> ("Ludovic Courtès"'s message of "Tue, 13 Jan 2009 23:45:16 +0100")

Hi Ludo,

Thanks for the review, it's appreciated. I've incorporated your vm.texi
changes and will push shortly.

On Tue 13 Jan 2009 23:45, ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic Courtès) writes:

>   s/toplevel/top-level/

Ooh, this one is painful -- I feel like if it changes in the docs it
should change in the code too. Do you really think this is the right
thing? top-level-ref ? <ghil-top-level-env> ?

>   s/runtime/run-time/

So, to me:

  "run-time" sounds better as an adjective, and as a noun meaning "when
    code is executed"; and

  "runtime" sounds better for "the libguile runtime".

I've sprinkled appropriate changes. Let me know if it still reads wrong.

>   s/e.g./e.g.,/

To me, s/e.g./for example/ is an idempotent transformation. So if the
clause after "e.g." is short, no comma necessary. Otherwise you need a
comma for breath. But maybe it is a snooty style.

>> @node Extending the Compiler
>> @subsection Extending the Compiler
>
> I like this section.  :-)

Hah! Junkie :-)

>> recommended papers: Dybvig's HOCS, Ghuloum's compiler paper.

Ah yes, this was an oversight. I'll fix.

Thanks again!

Andy
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  reply	other threads:[~2009-01-15 22:03 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2009-01-11 17:37 compiler.texi: Compiling to the virtual machine Andy Wingo
2009-01-13 22:45 ` Ludovic Courtès
2009-01-15 22:03   ` Andy Wingo [this message]
2009-01-17 23:12     ` Ludovic Courtès
2009-01-19 20:43       ` Ken Raeburn

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