From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: main.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Stephen Compall Newsgroups: gmane.lisp.guile.bugs Subject: Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi Date: 24 Jul 2003 14:14:53 -0500 Sender: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Message-ID: References: <200307161737.h6GHbb200806@csserver.evansville.edu> <87znj4by1r.fsf@zip.com.au> NNTP-Posting-Host: main.gmane.org Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-Trace: main.gmane.org 1059074202 24779 80.91.224.249 (24 Jul 2003 19:16:42 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@main.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Thu, 24 Jul 2003 19:16:42 +0000 (UTC) Cc: bug-guile@gnu.org Original-X-From: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Thu Jul 24 21:16:36 2003 Return-path: Original-Received: from monty-python.gnu.org ([199.232.76.173]) by main.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 3.35 #1 (Debian)) id 19flZU-0006Og-00 for ; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 21:16:12 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=monty-python.gnu.org) by monty-python.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.20) id 19flaT-0007WZ-4k for guile-bugs@m.gmane.org; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 15:17:13 -0400 Original-Received: from list by monty-python.gnu.org with tmda-scanned (Exim 4.20) id 19fla5-0006we-78 for bug-guile@gnu.org; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 15:16:49 -0400 Original-Received: from mail by monty-python.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.20) id 19fla1-0006gU-80 for bug-guile@gnu.org; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 15:16:45 -0400 Original-Received: from [192.195.228.35] (helo=csserver.evansville.edu) by monty-python.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.20) id 19flZz-0006LG-2e for bug-guile@gnu.org; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 15:16:43 -0400 Original-Received: from csserver.evansville.edu (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by csserver.evansville.edu (8.12.8/8.12.8) with ESMTP id h6OJErV5012172; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 14:14:53 -0500 Original-Received: (from sc87@localhost) by csserver.evansville.edu (8.12.8/8.12.8/Submit) id h6OJEr4E012168; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 14:14:53 -0500 X-Authentication-Warning: csserver.evansville.edu: sc87 set sender to s11@member.fsf.org using -f Original-To: Kevin Ryde In-Reply-To: <87znj4by1r.fsf@zip.com.au> Original-Lines: 43 User-Agent: Gnus/5.09 (Gnus v5.9.0) Emacs/21.2 X-BeenThere: bug-guile@gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.2 Precedence: list List-Id: Bug reports for GUILE, GNU's Ubiquitous Extension Language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Xref: main.gmane.org gmane.lisp.guile.bugs:870 X-Report-Spam: http://spam.gmane.org/gmane.lisp.guile.bugs:870 Kevin Ryde writes: > It'll be easier to review if you post independent changes separately, > showing the new text. Agreed. > > * scheme-control.texi (while do): Continue converting to active > > voice. > > I wouldn't worry about that sort of thing, not unless it's really > unclear. I don't know about that, but the named let section and do section were suddenly much clearer after I converted them. I suppose those two would qualify for that criteria, but I seem only able to tell in hindsight, that is after changing the voice, and it is *always* an improvement. That's why I just swept the text. > > * scheme-control.texi (begin): Added note about begin's > > uselessness. > > Well, it's only sometimes not required. If you want to add something, > then perhaps a typical use in an `if'. Just kidding :) > > Untabified. > > Fixed result indication in call-with-values example. > > Thanks, I applied these bits. I assume you want me to repropose the remainder of the changes on guile-devel, as suggested earlier? -- Stephen Compall or s11 or sirian The study of non-linear physics is like the study of non-elephant biology. BROMURE national information infrastructure Indigo event security clandestine nuclear benelux Soviet Capricorn e-cash Roswell Leuken-Baden AVN quarter bemd _______________________________________________ Bug-guile mailing list Bug-guile@gnu.org http://mail.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/bug-guile