From: Stephen Compall <s11@member.fsf.org>
Cc: bug-guile@gnu.org
Subject: Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi
Date: 24 Jul 2003 14:14:53 -0500 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <xfyfzkv68k2.fsf@csserver.evansville.edu> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <87znj4by1r.fsf@zip.com.au>
Kevin Ryde <user42@zip.com.au> writes:
> It'll be easier to review if you post independent changes separately,
> showing the new text.
Agreed.
> > * scheme-control.texi (while do): Continue converting to active
> > voice.
>
> I wouldn't worry about that sort of thing, not unless it's really
> unclear.
I don't know about that, but the named let section and do section were
suddenly much clearer after I converted them. I suppose those two
would qualify for that criteria, but I seem only able to tell in
hindsight, that is after changing the voice, and it is *always* an
improvement. That's why I just swept the text.
> > * scheme-control.texi (begin): Added note about begin's
> > uselessness.
>
> Well, it's only sometimes not required. If you want to add something,
> then perhaps a typical use in an `if'.
Just kidding :)
> > Untabified.
> > Fixed result indication in call-with-values example.
>
> Thanks, I applied these bits.
I assume you want me to repropose the remainder of the changes on
guile-devel, as suggested earlier?
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Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2003-07-16 17:37 [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi Stephen Compall
2003-07-17 22:50 ` Kevin Ryde
2003-07-18 17:14 ` Stephen Compall
2003-07-18 23:38 ` Kevin Ryde
2003-07-23 23:53 ` Kevin Ryde
2003-07-24 19:14 ` Stephen Compall [this message]
2003-07-25 22:37 ` Kevin Ryde
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