From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: main.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Kevin Ryde Newsgroups: gmane.lisp.guile.bugs Subject: Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi Date: Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:04 +1000 Sender: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Message-ID: <87znj4by1r.fsf@zip.com.au> References: <200307161737.h6GHbb200806@csserver.evansville.edu> NNTP-Posting-Host: main.gmane.org Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-Trace: main.gmane.org 1059004565 28289 80.91.224.249 (23 Jul 2003 23:56:05 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@main.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Wed, 23 Jul 2003 23:56:05 +0000 (UTC) Cc: bug-guile@gnu.org Original-X-From: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Thu Jul 24 01:56:00 2003 Return-path: Original-Received: from monty-python.gnu.org ([199.232.76.173]) by main.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 3.35 #1 (Debian)) id 19fTS6-0007Jo-00 for ; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 01:55:22 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=monty-python.gnu.org) by monty-python.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.20) id 19fTSr-0008B2-FD for guile-bugs@m.gmane.org; Wed, 23 Jul 2003 19:56:09 -0400 Original-Received: from list by monty-python.gnu.org with tmda-scanned (Exim 4.20) id 19fTRf-0007Vb-LE for bug-guile@gnu.org; Wed, 23 Jul 2003 19:54:55 -0400 Original-Received: from mail by monty-python.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.20) id 19fTR8-0006Ve-EM for bug-guile@gnu.org; Wed, 23 Jul 2003 19:54:53 -0400 Original-Received: from snoopy.pacific.net.au ([61.8.0.36]) by monty-python.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.20) id 19fTQD-0003zf-0q; Wed, 23 Jul 2003 19:53:25 -0400 Original-Received: from sunny.pacific.net.au (sunny.pacific.net.au [203.2.228.40]) by snoopy.pacific.net.au (8.12.3/8.12.3/Debian-6.4) with ESMTP id h6NNrJiI023438; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:20 +1000 Original-Received: from wisma.pacific.net.au (wisma.pacific.net.au [210.23.129.72]) by sunny.pacific.net.au with ESMTP id h6NNrIQg015786; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:18 +1000 (EST) Original-Received: from localhost (ppp55.dyn228.pacific.net.au [203.143.228.55]) by wisma.pacific.net.au (8.12.9/8.12.9) with ESMTP id h6NNrF8E020851; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:17 +1000 (EST) Original-Received: from gg by localhost with local (Exim 3.35 #1 (Debian)) id 19fTPu-0006G4-00; Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:06 +1000 Original-To: Stephen Compall User-Agent: Gnus/5.090019 (Oort Gnus v0.19) Emacs/21.2 (gnu/linux) X-BeenThere: bug-guile@gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.2 Precedence: list List-Id: Bug reports for GUILE, GNU's Ubiquitous Extension Language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guile-bounces+guile-bugs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Xref: main.gmane.org gmane.lisp.guile.bugs:869 X-Report-Spam: http://spam.gmane.org/gmane.lisp.guile.bugs:869 Stephen Compall writes: > > I was planning on saving this until I could get all the way through > the file, but it's getting a little unwieldy, so please have a look. > ChangeLog at the bottom of this email. It'll be easier to review if you post independent changes separately, showing the new text. > * scheme-control.texi (while do): Continue converting to active > voice. I wouldn't worry about that sort of thing, not unless it's really unclear. > * scheme-control.texi (begin): Added note about begin's > uselessness. Well, it's only sometimes not required. If you want to add something, then perhaps a typical use in an `if'. > Untabified. > Fixed result indication in call-with-values example. Thanks, I applied these bits. _______________________________________________ Bug-guile mailing list Bug-guile@gnu.org http://mail.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/bug-guile