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* minor style suggestion in files.texi
@ 2007-10-11 14:03 Robert J. Chassell
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From: Robert J. Chassell @ 2007-10-11 14:03 UTC (permalink / raw)
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In spoken English, the phrase `used to' has two different meanings:

  * how an item is used, and

  * that a person is accustomed.

In my experience -- this applies primarily to people for whom English
is a poorly understood second or third language, read rather than
spoken -- readers are more likely to presume the first meaning of the
phrase `used to', how an item is used, than the second, that a person
is accustomed.

Thus, we find the first meaning in   emacs/doc/emacs/emacs.texi

    Dired's @kbd{.} (Period) command can also be used to delete old versions.

as well as the second meaning in the same file in

    If you are used to earlier versions of VC ...

I would rewrite that conditional to

    If you are accustomed to earlier versions of VC ...

In the same file, I would change
    VC-mode commands used to operate on only one file ...
to
    VC-mode commands once operated on only one file ...

Others' experience and sense may be different; this is a suggestion.

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