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([2a00:f41:c45:2c67:419e:ea2e:3b53:153e]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id dn4sm6104795edb.88.2021.05.18.12.05.14 for (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Tue, 18 May 2021 12:05:15 -0700 (PDT) Content-Language: en-GB Received-SPF: pass client-ip=2a00:1450:4864:20::531; envelope-from=mrsebastianurban@gmail.com; helo=mail-ed1-x531.google.com X-Spam_score_int: -20 X-Spam_score: -2.1 X-Spam_bar: -- X-Spam_report: (-2.1 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org List-Id: "Bug reports for GNU Emacs, the Swiss army knife of text editors" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: "bug-gnu-emacs" Xref: news.gmane.io gmane.emacs.bugs:206832 Archived-At: Currently, in the Preface of the Emacs manual (EMACS.TEXI - L1291), there is: To run the tutorial, start Emacs and type @kbd{C-h t} (which is ``control h and then t''). I think, the part between parens should look better, e.g. similar to this part of SCREEN.TEXI (L126): ...(hold down @key{Ctrl} and type @kbd{x}, then let go of @key{Ctrl} and type @kbd{=})... ...i.e.: ...(hold down @key{Ctrl} and type @kbd{h}, then let go of @key{Ctrl} and type @kbd{t}). That's all. -- S. U.