Thanks for the quick review!  Revised patch is attached.


On 25/06/2017 16:26, Eli Zaretskii wrote:
>> From: "Charles A. Roelli" <charles@aurox.ch>
>> Date: Sun, 25 Jun 2017 11:14:23 +0200
>>
>> Here's a doc patch for ElDoc, with some minor readability fixes.
> Thanks.  Please allow me a few comments below.
>
>> -(defun eldoc-message (&rest args)
>> +(defun eldoc-message (&optional format-string &rest args)
>> +  "Store and display the given message.
> The first line of a doc string should ideally mention the arguments.

   "Store and possibly display FORMAT-STRING formatted with ARGS.

FORMAT-STRING (or nil, if not given) is stored in
`eldoc-last-message'.  If ARGS are given, FORMAT-STRING is first
formatted through `format-message'.

If `eldoc-last-message' is non-nil, display it using
`eldoc-message-function'.  If it is nil, clear the echo area if
there was recently a message from ElDoc there.

Return `eldoc-last-message'."

>
>> +FORMAT-STRING and ARGS, if given, are passed to `format-message',
>> +the output of which is stored in `eldoc-last-message'.
> This leaves me wondering what happens if no arguments are supplied.

See above.

>
>>   (defun eldoc--message-command-p (command)
>> +  "Non-nil if COMMAND is a command in `eldoc-message-commands'."
> "Return non-nil if ...".  The way you wrote it is appropriate for a
> variable, not for a function.

Fixed.

>
>>   (defun eldoc-pre-command-refresh-echo-area ()
>> +  "Reprint `eldoc-last-message' to the echo area."
> Are you sure about the "to" part?  I'd say "in" sounds more correct.

Agreed, it's fixed.

>
>>   (defun eldoc-display-message-p ()
>> +  "Non-nil when appropriate to display an ElDoc message."
> "Return non-nil"

Fixed.

>
>>   (defun eldoc-display-message-no-interference-p ()
>> +  "Nil when displaying an ElDoc message would cause interference
>> +with other features."
> Likewise.  Also, the first line of a doc string should be a complete
> sentence.

Fixed.

>
>>   (defun eldoc-print-current-symbol-info ()
>> +  "Print the output of `eldoc-documentation-function'."
> "Print the output" sounds confusing.  How about this instead:
>
>    Print the text produced by `eldoc-documentation-function'.

Fixed.

>
>>   (defun eldoc-docstring-format-sym-doc (prefix doc &optional face)
>> +  "Concatenate PREFIX and DOC, returning the largest part of the
>> +resultant string that can fit in the minibuffer window.
> First line not a complete sentence again.

How about this?

   "Combine PREFIX and DOC, and shorten the result to fit in the echo area.

When PREFIX is a symbol, propertize its symbol name with FACE
before combining it with DOC.  If FACE is not provided, just
apply the nil face.

See also: `eldoc-echo-area-use-multiline-p'."

>> +When PREFIX is a symbol, apply FACE to it before concatenating.
> But FACE is optional, so what if it isn't given?

See above.

>
> Thanks for working on this.

Thanks again for your advice.