From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Michael Witten Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.bugs Subject: bug#11862: [PATCH 1/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Offset modifier Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2012 16:52:00 -0000 Message-ID: References: <49c61d76f8a84f2b8ac1091b557d0864-mfwitten@gmail.com> NNTP-Posting-Host: plane.gmane.org X-Trace: dough.gmane.org 1341507259 12795 80.91.229.3 (5 Jul 2012 16:54:19 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@dough.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Thu, 5 Jul 2012 16:54:19 +0000 (UTC) Cc: 11862@debbugs.gnu.org To: Richard Stallman Original-X-From: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Thu Jul 05 18:54:19 2012 Return-path: Envelope-to: geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([208.118.235.17]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpJo-00055n-NS for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 18:54:16 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1]:51786 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpJn-0003Tr-RF for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:54:15 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.92]:47289) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpJk-0003Sv-2Q for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:54:13 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpJi-0002Td-BS for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:54:11 -0400 Original-Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([140.186.70.43]:41289) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpJi-0002TN-5c for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:54:10 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpOQ-0003oh-7b for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:59:02 -0400 X-Loop: help-debbugs@gnu.org Resent-From: Michael Witten Original-Sender: debbugs-submit-bounces@debbugs.gnu.org Resent-CC: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org Resent-Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2012 16:59:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 11862 X-GNU-PR-Package: emacs X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch Original-Received: via spool by 11862-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B11862.134150749414613 (code B ref 11862); Thu, 05 Jul 2012 16:59:02 +0000 Original-Received: (at 11862) by debbugs.gnu.org; 5 Jul 2012 16:58:14 +0000 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:50835 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpNd-0003nd-PE for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:58:13 -0400 Original-Received: from mail-bk0-f44.google.com ([209.85.214.44]:65124) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SmpNc-0003nW-FT for 11862@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 12:58:13 -0400 Original-Received: by bkty7 with SMTP id y7so569247bkt.3 for <11862@debbugs.gnu.org>; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 09:53:17 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=subject:date:from:to:cc:message-id:in-reply-to:references; bh=EyhuFa6u7X5wQeh6ZMTxX4aULoePof9EZTl0hfHql7g=; b=ucUUhQPF63QjRiOp79cEf6yIwc2ajP3f0mDQccoiIlHnk+kN4v7rWYfIMqLMV2bJtn FTAhb6eQSKxiROTz7qXorbuR0ZoRHvqQubz6PQ6HsOUI+4YRCimAIuEIVFbDD0p7H4Nr kQ2RtohwO5mieesCN7DzbIuDg6gsKQ6lTQR1P5XoPPRhTGvAXD6uBYaIuanwQU/T//tY n4nBdLRph/zQPbFDk3Ym400b2Pcsluyctct5M8XBvHKEwTgyklqFAUACokxPQK/01I83 yu+BT1Sx7gdm6Oq86Omczl7tOB3fRWweJnFbe5Y8QRLM0o3HC4XhmGlXFaV33t+CUZFf 4mkQ== Original-Received: by 10.204.136.215 with SMTP id s23mr13880473bkt.32.1341507197439; Thu, 05 Jul 2012 09:53:17 -0700 (PDT) Original-Received: from gmail.com (tor18.anonymizer.ccc.de. [31.172.30.1]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id o4sm20933019bkv.15.2012.07.05.09.53.15 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Thu, 05 Jul 2012 09:53:16 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.13 Precedence: list X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 2.6 (newer, 2) X-Received-From: 140.186.70.43 X-BeenThere: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org List-Id: "Bug reports for GNU Emacs, the Swiss army knife of text editors" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Xref: news.gmane.org gmane.emacs.bugs:61620 Archived-At: On Thu, 05 Jul 2012 06:13:55 -0400, Richard Stallman wrote: > - Sometimes to help describe one form we show another form that > + Sometimes to help describe one form, we show another form that > produces identical results. > > An unpaired comma here is not correct. > This would be correct > > + Sometimes, to help describe one form, we show another form that > > or this > > + To help describe one form, we sometimes show another form that > > However, the current text is also correct; commas here are not > required. I prefer your second suggestion above all else.