() Xue Fuqiao <xfq.free@gmail.com>
() Thu, 6 Jun 2013 07:13:33 +0800

   > How about removing motivation and adding in its place text that
   > [describes branch points]

   Looks good.  Would you like to send a patch here (or install it
   yourself if you think it's appropriate)?  I'm not confident in my
   phrasing.

No, thanks.  I would prefer you to take heart and push through the
change (to) yourself, so that you control the iteration and tempo.
That is how to gain phrased wor[dk]s by doing phrased reflection.  :-D

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