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From: Stephen Berman <stephen.berman@gmx.net>
To: Noam Postavsky <npostavs@users.sourceforge.net>
Cc: 23746@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: bug#23746: 25.0.95; Doc fixes (grammar, typos, clarification)
Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 19:58:27 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <871t421e7w.fsf@gmx.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <87h9czoh5v.fsf@gmx.net>

On Sat, 11 Jun 2016 16:21:19 -0400 Noam Postavsky <npostavs@users.sourceforge.net> wrote:

> On Sat, Jun 11, 2016 at 3:22 PM, Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org> wrote:
>>> >
>>> > This goes against the rest of the changes, which correctly made the
>>> > opposite replacement.  I see no reason to make the opposite change
>>> > here.
>>>
>>> I don't understand what you mean; the changes in that hunk are strictly
>>> grammatical corrections (underlined).
>>
>> Yes.  They are just backwards: "may wish telling" => "may wish to tell".
>>
>
> As a native English speaker, "your Lisp program may wish telling the
> process" sounds obviously incorrect (though I'm not sure how to
> explain why in terms of grammatical rules). Whereas, "your Lisp
> program may wish to tell the process" is correct.

That's one argument for this change; another is the statistical one
based on the existing Emacs documentation:

steve@rosalinde:/data/steve/git/emacs> grep -r " wish to " doc/ | wc -l
196
steve@rosalinde:/data/steve/git/emacs> grep -r " wish [a-z]*ing " doc/
doc/lispref/processes.texi:may wish telling the process the dimensions

Eli, does this persuade you to accept this change too?

Steve Berman







  reply	other threads:[~2016-06-12 17:58 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 19+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-06-11 15:54 bug#23746: 25.0.95; Doc fixes (grammar, typos, clarification) Stephen Berman
2016-06-11 16:08 ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-11 16:32   ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-11 19:22     ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-11 20:21       ` Noam Postavsky
2016-06-12 17:58         ` Stephen Berman [this message]
2016-06-12 18:55           ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-12 19:40             ` Ken Brown
2016-06-12 21:09               ` Noam Postavsky
2016-06-13  4:04                 ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-13  9:20                   ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-13  9:25                     ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-13 14:14                     ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-13 14:27                       ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-13 15:01                         ` Eli Zaretskii
2016-06-13 16:12                           ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-13 16:22                             ` Stephen Berman
2016-06-14  2:43                   ` Noam Postavsky
2016-06-14 14:29                     ` Eli Zaretskii

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