From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Drew Adams Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.bugs Subject: bug#15375: 24.3.50; Elisp manual: mention what units are used for window margin functions Date: Sat, 14 Sep 2013 09:26:42 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <4b95cb27-17b0-49ac-9fa2-a9d1445e75d9@default> References: <<56620f72-f813-4a5b-b6bc-3b543ebb8e50@default>> <<83ob7vfmlb.fsf@gnu.org>> NNTP-Posting-Host: plane.gmane.org Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Trace: ger.gmane.org 1379176041 20818 80.91.229.3 (14 Sep 2013 16:27:21 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@ger.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:27:21 +0000 (UTC) Cc: 15375@debbugs.gnu.org To: Eli Zaretskii , Drew Adams Original-X-From: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sat Sep 14 18:27:23 2013 Return-path: Envelope-to: geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([208.118.235.17]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgr-0006vl-Dz for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 18:27:21 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1]:54008 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgq-0004z2-A9 for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:27:20 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:53330) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgg-0004yv-G4 for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:27:17 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgZ-0005lw-BK for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:27:10 -0400 Original-Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([140.186.70.43]:56782) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgZ-0005lr-86 for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:27:03 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.80) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgY-0001GT-Go for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:27:02 -0400 X-Loop: help-debbugs@gnu.org Resent-From: Drew Adams Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org Resent-Date: Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:27:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 15375 X-GNU-PR-Package: emacs X-GNU-PR-Keywords: Original-Received: via spool by 15375-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B15375.13791760154846 (code B ref 15375); Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:27:02 +0000 Original-Received: (at 15375) by debbugs.gnu.org; 14 Sep 2013 16:26:55 +0000 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:36841 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.80) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgQ-0001G5-3r for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:26:54 -0400 Original-Received: from aserp1040.oracle.com ([141.146.126.69]:23484) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.80) (envelope-from ) id 1VKsgN-0001Fp-HB for 15375@debbugs.gnu.org; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:26:52 -0400 Original-Received: from ucsinet22.oracle.com (ucsinet22.oracle.com [156.151.31.94]) by aserp1040.oracle.com (Sentrion-MTA-4.3.1/Sentrion-MTA-4.3.1) with ESMTP id r8EGQi46011061 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK); Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:26:45 GMT Original-Received: from aserz7022.oracle.com (aserz7022.oracle.com [141.146.126.231]) by ucsinet22.oracle.com (8.14.4+Sun/8.14.4) with ESMTP id r8EGQhTZ000754 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:26:44 GMT Original-Received: from abhmt118.oracle.com (abhmt118.oracle.com [141.146.116.70]) by aserz7022.oracle.com (8.14.4+Sun/8.14.4) with ESMTP id r8EGQhR2006084; Sat, 14 Sep 2013 16:26:43 GMT In-Reply-To: <<83ob7vfmlb.fsf@gnu.org>> X-Priority: 3 X-Mailer: Oracle Beehive Extensions for Outlook 2.0.1.8 (707110) [OL 12.0.6680.5000 (x86)] X-Source-IP: ucsinet22.oracle.com [156.151.31.94] X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 3.x X-Received-From: 140.186.70.43 X-BeenThere: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org List-Id: "Bug reports for GNU Emacs, the Swiss army knife of text editors" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Xref: news.gmane.org gmane.emacs.bugs:78405 Archived-At: > I left it open to allow you to review the changes. You can do that > either by pointing your browser at > http://bzr.savannah.gnu.org/lh/emacs/trunk/annotate/head:/doc/lispref/dis= pla > y.texi and going down to line 4160, or by waiting for the next binary > snapshot of the trunk. Thanks, and thanks for that URL & line #. Looks good, but I have these minor suggestions, if you have the time: 1. Move the "(a.k.a.@: ``column'')" to the first occurrence of "character cell". I, for one, did not know the latter term, and wondered about it until I got to that aka. 2. You can remove this part, as it is implied: "; if none of the two margin= s exist, the function returns @code{(nil)}." (It does not hurt, but in that case please change "none" to "neither", to be clearer.) 3. You should add a comma before "and" in "The argument @var{left} controls the left margin and @var{right} controls the right margin (default @code{0}= )." , Alternatively, you can use ";" instead of ", and", or split it into two sentences.