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From: ken <gebser@mousecar.com>
To: help-gnu-emacs@gnu.org
Subject: Re: emacs documentation: what's active voice, passive voice?
Date: Fri, 10 Dec 2010 11:04:29 -0500	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <4D024F8D.8060707@mousecar.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <87aakee8bm.fsf@gmail.com>

On 12/09/2010 08:16 PM Sean Sieger wrote:
>     There is no royal road to writing, like Math.  To write better, read more.
>     Read, re-read, re-re-read, and read better what you've written (and
>     rewritten...).
> 
> Right?  
> 
> I always thought `reading is miswriting and writing is misreading'
> instructive.

Good advice.  And it applies to a lot more technical documentation than
just what's done for emacs.

There's a very old saying among writers: Writing is rewriting.  Yeah,
that means more time and work than just dashing off a first draft.  But
the benefits are worth it.

One technique for better documentation is to give your first draft to a
newbie and have him/her work from it.  That newb will notice any holes
or ambiguities and other failures in the text; these are then added into
the doc.  This amended doc would then be passed on to another newb and
the process repeats repeats until a newb has no more questions or
failures.  A wiki is a good platform for this kind of process.






  reply	other threads:[~2010-12-10 16:04 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2010-10-03  3:06 emacs documentation: what's active voice, passive voice? Xah Lee
2010-10-03 11:14 ` Uday Reddy
2010-10-03 19:29   ` Russ P.
2010-10-03 19:38     ` Jay Belanger
2010-10-03 20:50       ` David Kastrup
2010-10-03 22:57         ` Russ P.
2010-10-04 18:48     ` Alan Mackenzie
2010-10-05  0:53       ` Russ P.
     [not found]         ` <ias317$dtr$2@reader1.panix.com>
2010-11-04 19:22           ` Stefan Monnier
2010-11-04 20:10             ` Pascal J. Bourguignon
2010-12-09 17:48       ` Drew Adams
2010-12-10  1:16         ` Sean Sieger
2010-12-10 16:04           ` ken [this message]
2010-10-03 12:47 ` Bruce Stephens
2010-10-03 22:07 ` B. T. Raven
2010-10-04  6:52   ` David Kastrup
2010-10-05  4:02     ` B. T. Raven
2010-11-03 16:34       ` David Combs

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