From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Michael Witten Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.bugs Subject: bug#11689: [PATCH 00/14] Copyediting: etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:00:54 -0000 Message-ID: <1c1914fbe9e641219e6fff6d7fe92428-mfwitten@gmail.com> NNTP-Posting-Host: plane.gmane.org X-Trace: dough.gmane.org 1339547486 13184 80.91.229.3 (13 Jun 2012 00:31:26 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@dough.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:31:26 +0000 (UTC) To: 11689@debbugs.gnu.org Original-X-From: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Wed Jun 13 02:31:23 2012 Return-path: Envelope-to: geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([208.118.235.17]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1SebUZ-0003IP-7U for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Wed, 13 Jun 2012 02:31:23 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1]:44998 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebUY-0006Bg-VQ for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:31:22 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.92]:43468) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebUW-0006BR-ML for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:31:21 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebUT-0006Gf-WA for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:31:20 -0400 Original-Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([140.186.70.43]:58768) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebUT-0006GU-Qe for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:31:17 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SebX8-0006H2-3l for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:34:02 -0400 X-Loop: help-debbugs@gnu.org Resent-From: Michael Witten Original-Sender: debbugs-submit-bounces@debbugs.gnu.org Resent-CC: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org Resent-Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:34:01 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: report 11689 X-GNU-PR-Package: emacs X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch X-Debbugs-Original-To: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org Original-Received: via spool by submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B.133954759124026 (code B ref -1); Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:34:01 +0000 Original-Received: (at submit) by debbugs.gnu.org; 13 Jun 2012 00:33:11 +0000 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:40067 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SebWJ-0006FS-HI for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:33:11 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.92]:58457) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1SebQ8-00062O-WC for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:26:49 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebNS-0004FR-TF for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:24:04 -0400 Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([208.118.235.17]:54529) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebNS-0004FN-N4 for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:24:02 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.92]:35349) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebNQ-0005r4-Qw for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:24:02 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebNP-0004F2-0c for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:24:00 -0400 Original-Received: from mail-wg0-f49.google.com ([74.125.82.49]:50852) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1SebNO-0004Ej-NT for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:23:58 -0400 Original-Received: by wgbds1 with SMTP id ds1so6474wgb.30 for ; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 17:23:55 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=subject:date:from:to:message-id; bh=9ERvwLKMc1SjaXIbFs5oK93v+DhQcroUzC8ZjqPurpw=; b=UlBYwZMIS8HnfqrWOoziyBlFAdRHOXi7nepFWIKutwvw36gifSZ4dtbUuw/CFhmbg3 JxvDGCEVS11NsJI7euNDukKpZDLAiVjsEXF6W2C5i9vmEq1UoWPEBv3H8Vsb8XR4hgdW M9GY7uq1LwMvsZgmPSz2ONSxn1+zvnpQsDH6I+CDZBsNuQbxXMh4Bt3laGiluclb+f4F iQZ34H9XWg41sGWKrrRi9w3wSSEqj8b8hckcilknPMCurXbGbuGnk4/1fKJJU34qMOvx YZ2r20W6mgrFHawIa2DzR8kY/k/IEhIwkVX54SMgXxdhDYt+K4DPzF+oLOxmcordfnF4 ltKw== Original-Received: by 10.216.213.226 with SMTP id a76mr9651429wep.142.1339547035145; Tue, 12 Jun 2012 17:23:55 -0700 (PDT) Original-Received: from gmail.com (tor-exit-router35-readme.formlessnetworking.net. 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X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 2.6 (newer, 3) X-Mailman-Approved-At: Tue, 12 Jun 2012 20:33:07 -0400 X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.13 Precedence: list X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 2.6 (newer, 2) X-Received-From: 140.186.70.43 X-BeenThere: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org List-Id: "Bug reports for GNU Emacs, the Swiss army knife of text editors" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Xref: news.gmane.org gmane.emacs.bugs:60905 Archived-At: Whilst reading through the TUTORIAL, I made a few minor modifications. The following is a summary of the resulting patch series, the last patch of which adds an entry to etc/ChangeLog: etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove text saying `C-x 1' is first 2-char command etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Describe the act of scrolling text more consistently etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove redundant comparison of killing and deleting etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Eradicate the future tense etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Minor rewording to streamline and generalize `C-x s' intro etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Use `application' consistently by replacing an occurence of `program' etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Generalize the description of when to use `C-x C-c' etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove the word `globally' etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Replace occurences of `--' with more appropriate text etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: c-h-a-n-g-e-d -> "changed" etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Complete instructions by telling the user to move the cursor etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Make consistent the white space around `>>' instructions etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Place `C-x C-f' beside `find-file' for clarity etc/ChangeLog: Note my patch series for etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL etc/ChangeLog | 10 +++++ etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL | 118 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 2 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 50 deletions(-) -- 1.7.10.2.484.gcd07cc5