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From: Richard Stallman <rms@gnu.org>
To: Alan Mackenzie <acm@muc.de>
Cc: emacs-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: To non-native English writers: expunging the solecism "This allows to do something."
Date: Mon, 25 Jan 2016 10:35:49 -0500	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <E1aNjBF-0002hG-So@fencepost.gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20160124210602.GA7711@acm.fritz.box> (message from Alan Mackenzie on Sun, 24 Jan 2016 21:06:02 +0000)

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  > For some time I have been irritated by sentences of the form "This
  > allows to do something" in our source and documentation.

  > Such a sentence formation is NOT ENGLISH.

That's true.  In addition, that formation is unclear
because it fails to say who or what will do the thing.

The right way to write it is this way

  > (i) The person or other agent being allowed, followed by an infinitive
  >   verb:

  >     "This allows YOU to do something."
  >     "This allows EMACS to do something."

because it explicitly states who or what will do the thing.

These three constructions

      > "This allows DOING something."
      > "This allows THE DOING OF something."
      > "This allows SOMETHING to be done."

are correct English, but they share the problem of failing
to clarify who or what will do it.

  > The same considerations also apply to "permit", "enable", and "prevent"

That's right.  The point that we want to state who or what will be
permitted, enabled or prevented applies to them too.

Please everyone, fix these constructions to state the subject
and follow correct English.

-- 
Dr Richard Stallman
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  parent reply	other threads:[~2016-01-25 15:35 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 26+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-01-24 21:06 To non-native English writers: expunging the solecism "This allows to do something." Alan Mackenzie
2016-01-24 22:20 ` Marcin Borkowski
2016-01-24 22:54 ` Stephen Berman
2016-01-25 12:51   ` Alan Mackenzie
2016-01-25 14:03     ` Phillip Lord
2016-01-25 14:25     ` Stephen Berman
2016-01-25 15:35   ` Richard Stallman
2016-01-25 20:10     ` Stephen Berman
2016-01-25  2:41 ` Drew Adams
2016-01-25 15:13 ` Rostislav Svoboda
2016-01-25 15:16   ` Rostislav Svoboda
2016-01-25 16:18   ` Alan Mackenzie
2016-01-25 19:47     ` Michael Albinus
2016-01-25 16:41   ` Paul Eggert
2016-01-26  9:37     ` Richard Stallman
2016-01-25 15:35 ` Richard Stallman [this message]
2016-01-25 16:55   ` Rostislav Svoboda
2016-01-26  5:27     ` Yuri Khan
2016-01-26  9:37     ` Richard Stallman
2016-01-26 10:55       ` Rostislav Svoboda
2016-01-27  0:46         ` Richard Stallman
2016-01-25 23:14   ` Mathieu Lirzin
2016-01-26  3:07     ` Xue Fuqiao
2016-01-27  0:48     ` Richard Stallman
2016-01-27 11:06     ` Alan Mackenzie
2016-01-27 16:31       ` Mathieu Lirzin

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