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From: "Richard M. Stallman" <rms@gnu.org>
To: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Cc: rudalics@gmx.at, emacs-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: Changes to windows.texi
Date: Sun, 09 Nov 2008 10:13:34 -0500	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <E1KzByo-0003Bd-KV@fencepost.gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <uvduyqeda.fsf@gnu.org> (message from Eli Zaretskii on Sat, 08 Nov 2008 20:09:05 +0200)

    This usage of @xref in the middle of a sentence produces badly
    capitalized English, because @xref generates "See ..." with a capital
    S.  The right way of writing this kind of text is either

      The selected window's buffer is usually the current buffer (except
      when @code{set-buffer} has been used), see @ref{Current Buffer}.

It isn't correct to use a comma there -- you need a semicolon.

      If @var{window} is omitted, this function returns the buffer for the
      selected window.

Better is "If you omit..." since it is the active voice.




  parent reply	other threads:[~2008-11-09 15:13 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2008-11-07 14:31 Changes to windows.texi martin rudalics
2008-11-08 18:09 ` Eli Zaretskii
2008-11-08 19:56   ` martin rudalics
2008-11-08 20:16     ` Eli Zaretskii
2008-11-08 21:54       ` martin rudalics
2008-11-08 23:07         ` Eli Zaretskii
2008-11-09 15:13           ` Richard M. Stallman
2008-11-09 18:47             ` Eli Zaretskii
2008-11-10 19:28               ` Richard M. Stallman
2008-11-09 15:13   ` Richard M. Stallman [this message]
2008-11-09 21:23     ` Eli Zaretskii

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