From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.io!.POSTED.blaine.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Stefan Kangas Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.devel Subject: Re: emacs-27 fda6009: Minor copyedits of Emacs manual Date: Tue, 6 Jul 2021 14:30:36 +0200 Message-ID: References: <20210706115859.24857.52446@vcs0.savannah.gnu.org> <20210706115901.4C57E20B72@vcs0.savannah.gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Injection-Info: ciao.gmane.io; posting-host="blaine.gmane.org:116.202.254.214"; logging-data="20762"; mail-complaints-to="usenet@ciao.gmane.io" To: Emacs developers , Eli Zaretskii Original-X-From: emacs-devel-bounces+ged-emacs-devel=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Tue Jul 06 14:32:50 2021 Return-path: Envelope-to: ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane-mx.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([209.51.188.17]) by ciao.gmane.io with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1m0kFt-0005GJ-Rf for ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane-mx.org; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 14:32:49 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1]:40428 helo=lists1p.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1m0kFs-00055J-4c for ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane-mx.org; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 08:32:48 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]:48526) by lists.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1m0kE1-0003wX-LB for emacs-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 08:30:55 -0400 Original-Received: from mail-pf1-f181.google.com ([209.85.210.181]:35396) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_128_GCM_SHA256:128) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1m0kDy-0008MB-K2; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 08:30:52 -0400 Original-Received: by mail-pf1-f181.google.com with SMTP id d12so19326868pfj.2; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 05:30:49 -0700 (PDT) X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to; bh=OSFlHT42ALustIwxhNEDqEO4OTkyCbORwp8H2aXBMKc=; b=B4Llf+5mDjpp+CCDWovERKWf2AYz0Cv7y+npwxJdrU0n/YmyqT2SpolTqCUSicOIzr wCfcVzaRXZkNnNdQuK9lPCAJwbZV1zC6yy5fXEl/I6HIh2YNaYhbPzo3g6GXHw7OhxHZ lH6ILvr5t08+eCpQItM0z44bR5TGAYNRDbZofiS2BCD+20NGo9kG1CW2esID9n1ER+fh VMQqsAPzHvIbm9+nwzpNiElwC97dkVPRUjK5XmB+fZYNeYA4zUVhdtS5Nqs8BO3ywtHx 6mQ+8ZqU12sD7JuT2qbd7dGmBg8gwlwnkMnJMfFIgqt/JLQwt4DNi47nop+HkTigPUdE ISWQ== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM532a+4Bs0llGRNVRxttmCXFAk8hqmre2metXWb655l9ufg4qEGtQ deG+F62jdYvfn2BrIZLgW26Bgi52LOTvfCz/pT5Uo51/ X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJwF05byLFAJr+f0//ZovShsbrSJDI5p42fCyzxIvfAES3F6p4qa6yQdjLe8aFjPgTN55xtL03e8pWd8Wx1pXTc= X-Received: by 2002:a63:d305:: with SMTP id b5mr21226389pgg.67.1625574647918; Tue, 06 Jul 2021 05:30:47 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <20210706115901.4C57E20B72@vcs0.savannah.gnu.org> Received-SPF: pass client-ip=209.85.210.181; envelope-from=stefankangas@gmail.com; helo=mail-pf1-f181.google.com X-Spam_score_int: -13 X-Spam_score: -1.4 X-Spam_bar: - X-Spam_report: (-1.4 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN=0.25, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS=0.249, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: emacs-devel@gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: "Emacs development discussions." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: emacs-devel-bounces+ged-emacs-devel=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: "Emacs-devel" Xref: news.gmane.io gmane.emacs.devel:271150 Archived-At: Eli Zaretskii writes: > branch: emacs-27 > commit fda60094a2a686323bcf23439e286f2240cfe737 > Author: Eli Zaretskii > Commit: Eli Zaretskii > > Minor copyedits of Emacs manual Thanks for working on improving the manual. One small comment: > Emacs comes with an introductory online tutorial available in many > -languages. This book picks up where that tutorial ends. It explains > -the full range of Emacs's power and contains reference material useful > -to expert users. > +languages, and this manual picks up where that tutorial ends. It > +explains the full range of the power of Emacs, now up to @strong{version > +27.2}, and contains reference material useful to expert users. It > +also includes appendices with specific material about X and GTK > +resources, and with details for users of macOS and Microsoft Windows. I think the final sentence here could be left out. The appendices aren't super exciting or important in themselves, and the paragraph as a whole carries more punch without it. Just my two cents.