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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: emacs-devel-bounces+ged-emacs-devel=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: "Emacs-devel" Xref: news.gmane.io gmane.emacs.devel:294655 Archived-At: Eli Zaretskii writes: > > branch: master > commit 06f440eb814636fc6c5ed9d785a2f5ef980ea5e8 > Author: Eli Zaretskii > Commit: Eli Zaretskii > > ; Fix recent additions to Emacs manual > > * doc/emacs/commands.texi (User Input, Mice): Fix punctuation, > indexing, and wording. > --- > doc/emacs/commands.texi | 18 +++++++++++------- > 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/doc/emacs/commands.texi b/doc/emacs/commands.texi > index 9d08dd057c..ada3bf6a43 100644 > --- a/doc/emacs/commands.texi > +++ b/doc/emacs/commands.texi > @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ where the @key{Meta} key does not function reliably. > > Emacs has extensive support for using mouse buttons, mouse wheels > and other pointing devices like touchpads and touch screens. > -@xref{Mice} for details. > +@xref{Mice}, for details. > > @cindex keys stolen by window manager > @cindex window manager, keys stolen by > @@ -141,17 +141,20 @@ use @key{F1} to display a list of commands starting with @key{ESC}. > > @node Mice > @section Mice > +@cindexd mouse input This is a nitpick, but... Could we use the singular "mouse" instead of "mice" in the @node name? For example, by naming it "Mouse input" or "Mouse events" or similar. I believe that change might make it more immediately obvious to non-native speakers of English. (I usually only have one "mouse" on any given machine, while having several "mice" sounds a bit unusual, to say the least.)